Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时句子较长且结尾不完整，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免句子中断。可以适当使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I am currently working as an English teacher at a primary school, teaching children aged 7 to 12. I really enjoy this job because it allows me to help students improve their language skills and gain confidence. Seeing their progress is very rewarding for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议注意句子结构和避免重复，同时补充完整信息，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: I work at a comprehensive school in Shenzhen that offers a broad curriculum. Students study core subjects like math and Chinese, as well as art and physical education.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且含糊，建议回答时保持句子完整，表达清晰，避免无意义的重复，并具体说明理由。

Ví dụ: I think it's a great place to work because it offers good salaries and a supportive environment. The colleagues are friendly and helpful, which makes the workplace enjoyable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议注意主谓一致和用词准确，避免使用不合适的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like my workplace. Besides the reasons I mentioned earlier, the children are one of the main reasons I love my school. They are very cute and brave in expressing their feelings.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达未来计划，并注意语法和句子结构。

Ví dụ: For now, I plan to continue my studies to improve my oral English. Since I have been teaching young children for a long time, my spoken English is quite simple, so I want to enhance it.

× It is very rewarding for me to see their.

✓ It is very rewarding for me to see them.

句子缺少宾语，'their' 是物主代词，需用宾格代词 'them' 来作宾语。

× I work at a school in Shenzhen where is where is quite comprehensive because it offers it offers a broad curriculum.

✓ I work at a school in Shenzhen which is quite comprehensive because it offers a broad curriculum.

句子中重复且缺少主语，'where is where is' 应改为 'which is' 来引导定语从句。

× Students learn the core subjects such as math and Chinese as well as art and physical.

✓ Students learn the core subjects such as math and Chinese as well as art and physical education.

'physical' 作为形容词不能单独作名词，需补全为 'physical education'。

× I think it's absolutely a great place to work because it is off.

✓ I think it's absolutely a great place to work because it is good.

'it is off' 语义不明确，应改为 'it is good' 或其他合适表达。

× Otherwise, the colleges, the colleges are.

✓ Otherwise, the colleagues are nice.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Beside the reason I described above, children is absolutely one of the main reasons I love my school.

✓ Besides the reasons I described above, children are absolutely one of the main reasons I love my school.

'children' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数 'are'，且 'Beside' 应为 'Besides'。

× They are very cute and brave to express their love to all of their teeth.

✓ They are very cute and brave to express their love to all of their teachers.

'teeth' 是牙齿，语义错误，应为 'teachers'。

× For now, I would like to make a further plan for studying because for a long time working in at a primary school, my oral English is just simple as the level of primary school because I need to speak the simple.

✓ For now, I would like to make a further plan for studying because after working at a primary school for a long time, my oral English is just as simple as the level of primary school because I need to speak simply.

句子结构混乱，'working in at' 应改为 'working at'，'just simple as' 应为 'just as simple as'，'speak the simple' 应为 'speak simply'。