Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'over there' and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use articles correctly, e.g., 'a software engineer'.

Ví dụ: Currently, I work as a software engineer at a company called Bliss. I've been there for about four years, and I really enjoy my job because it allows me to communicate with others and contribute to developing software products.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has some grammatical errors. Use complete sentences and correct prepositions. Also, avoid vague words like 'apparently'. Add linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I work at a company located in the central part of Kupendon. It is a very nice workplace where my colleagues are approachable, and my boss has guided me throughout my career. I really enjoy working there.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too long and somewhat repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: It is a good place to work mainly because of the calm surroundings, including a beautiful garden. Additionally, the office has good infrastructure and free parking, and my colleagues are very friendly.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use simpler, clearer sentences and correct tenses. Avoid repeating words like 'first'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I love the place where I work, mainly because of my amiable boss and supportive colleagues. When I started, I was a novice and didn't know much about the workplace, but they helped me a lot throughout my journey.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words like 'mostly' and 'maybe'. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to work in multinational software companies where I can interact with international colleagues. This will help me expand my knowledge and gain valuable international experience.

× I'm software engineer over there.

✓ I'm a software engineer over there.

The noun 'software engineer' is singular and requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct in English.

× Apparently I'm working at a company called which is situated at the central part of Kupendon.

✓ Apparently I'm working at a company which is situated in the central part of Kupendon.

The preposition 'in' is used to indicate location within an area, so 'in the central part' is correct instead of 'at the central part'. Also, 'called' should be followed by the company name, which is missing here.

× It is very nice workplace, colleagues are very much approachable as well as the boss helps me a lot.

✓ It is a very nice workplace; colleagues are very approachable, and the boss helps me a lot.

The sentence lacks articles and proper punctuation. 'Workplace' needs the article 'a'. Also, the sentence should be split or connected properly with conjunctions or punctuation for clarity.

× We have free parking as well as the people around me is very great.

✓ We have free parking as well as the people around me are very great.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× It's a love for the place where I work mostly because of my boss and the colleagues that I work with because they're very much amiable as well as they support me throughout my journey.

✓ I love the place where I work mostly because of my boss and the colleagues I work with; they are very amiable and support me throughout my journey.

'It's a love' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I love'. Also, the sentence is long and can be improved by splitting and removing redundant words for clarity.

× Whenever I always started, I was very novice regarding the work.

✓ When I started, I was very novice regarding the work.

'Whenever I always started' is redundant and incorrect. 'When I started' is the correct past tense expression. Also, 'novice' is an adjective here and used correctly.

× I didn't know anything about the workplace since that was the first first journey of my company.

✓ I didn't know anything about the workplace since that was my first journey in the company.

The phrase 'first first journey of my company' is awkward and repetitive. 'My first journey in the company' is clearer and uses the correct preposition 'in' for being part of the company.

× I will be mostly working on this type of software product company, mostly maybe in the multinational companies where I can interact with multiple international people because I want to expand my knowledge and get with the people and maybe get experience, international experience as well as.

✓ I will mostly work in this type of software product company, maybe in multinational companies where I can interact with many international people because I want to expand my knowledge, connect with people, and gain international experience as well.

The modal verb phrase 'will be mostly working on' is awkward; 'will mostly work in' is more natural. Also, 'get with the people' is incorrect; 'connect with people' is appropriate. The sentence is long and needs restructuring for clarity.