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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

I'm a student and major in business administration.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

Well, as I said, I'm a student and now I currently study in Tongji University which is located in Shanghai.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

Well, yes, it's beautiful and has a lot of modern equipment.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I love the place and actually I don't have a steady place to work. I just go to library or in my dormitory.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

Well, I'm 19 and I'm not quite sure about it actually.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以稍微丰富内容,增加细节,使回答更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I'm a student majoring in business administration at Tongji University, and I find the subject very interesting because it covers various aspects of managing a business.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中重复了之前的信息,且没有直接回答“工作地点”,建议直接回答问题并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I don't have a job currently because I'm a full-time student at Tongji University in Shanghai.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较简单,缺少具体细节和理由,建议增加具体描述和原因,使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to work because the campus is beautiful and well-equipped with modern facilities that support learning and research.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但结构稍显混乱,建议先明确回答,再补充细节,并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like the places where I work. Since I don't have a fixed workspace, I usually study either in the library or my dormitory, both of which are comfortable and quiet.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且缺乏内容,建议表达一些想法或计划,即使不确定,也可以谈谈兴趣或可能方向。

Ví dụ: I'm still exploring my options since I'm only 19, but I'm interested in pursuing a career in marketing or finance after graduation.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I'm a student and major in business administration.

I'm a student and majoring in business administration.

在英语中,动词 'major' 在表示专业时,通常用动名词形式 'majoring',表示正在进行的动作。这里需要用动名词形式来表达专业学习的状态。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I just go to library or in my dormitory.

I just go to the library or stay in my dormitory.

'go to library' 缺少定冠词 'the',应为 'go to the library'。另外,'or in my dormitory' 结构不完整,缺少动词,需改为 'or stay in my dormitory'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I'm not quite sure about it actually.

I'm not quite sure about it, actually.

句末的 'actually' 作为副词,前面应加逗号以分隔,增强语义清晰度。

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