Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณดีที่แสดงความตั้งใจและเหตุผล แต่ควรใช้ประโยคที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้นและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำ เช่น 'connect new people' ควรเป็น 'connect with new people' และ 'share some interest' ควรเป็น 'share similar interests' นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so'.

Ví dụ: I'm currently a student studying IELTS at home because I want to improve my English skills. I enjoy being a student as it allows me to gain more knowledge and connect with new people who share similar interests in learning.

Gợi ý: คำตอบมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'I still studying' ควรเป็น 'I am still studying' และ 'I want to have wrote' ควรเป็น 'I want to have a job' หรือ 'I want to do work' นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อทำให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และชัดเจนขึ้น เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so'.

Ví dụ: At the moment, I am still studying at home, but in the future, I hope to work in a professional environment such as an international company where I can fully utilize my English skills. I want to have a job that involves important responsibilities, so having strong language skills would be a great challenge for me.

Gợi ý: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงเรื่องไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'encourage' ควรเป็น 'encourages' และ 'must feel comfortable develop' ควรเป็น 'would feel comfortable developing' นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค เช่น 'because' หรือ 'and' เพื่อความลื่นไหล.

Ví dụ: If I can use my English skills regularly, I think it would be a good place to work because it would help me improve and feel confident. Also, the environment is supportive and encourages communication, so I would feel comfortable developing my abilities there.

Gợi ý: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงเรื่องไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น 'is freely and supportive' ควรเป็น 'is free and supportive' หรือ 'is friendly and supportive' และ 'must like it' ควรเป็น 'would like it' นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค เช่น 'because' หรือ 'and'.

Ví dụ: Of course, if my workplace is close to where I live, I would like it. It's also important that the work environment is friendly and supportive, with colleagues who get along well. If the workload is manageable, I think I would really enjoy working there.

Gợi ý: คำตอบดีและชัดเจน แต่ควรแก้คำผิด เช่น 'work aboard' ควรเป็น 'work abroad' และเพิ่ม linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so'.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to work abroad to improve my English skills and gain international experience. For example, I am interested in positions such as a flight attendant, receptionist, or office assistant.

× At the moment I still studying at home, but in the future I hope to work in a professional environment such as an international company where I can fully utilize my English skills.

✓ At the moment I am still studying at home, but in the future I hope to work in a professional environment such as an international company where I can fully utilize my English skills.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'studying'. In English, the present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' (am/is/are) plus the '-ing' form of the main verb. Therefore, 'I still studying' should be corrected to 'I am still studying'. This correction ensures proper verb tense and sentence structure.

× I want to have wrote that involve important responsibilities, so having a strong language skill would be a big adventure for me.

✓ I want to have work that involves important responsibilities, so having strong language skills would be a big adventure for me.

The phrase 'have wrote' is incorrect because 'wrote' is the simple past tense of 'write' and cannot follow 'have' in this context. The correct form is 'have work' or 'have a job'. Also, 'involve' should be 'involves' to agree with the singular noun 'work'. Additionally, 'language skill' should be pluralized to 'language skills' to sound natural. This correction fixes verb tense and subject-verb agreement.

× I enjoy being a student as it gives me the chance to gain more knowledge and connect new people online who share some interest in studying additionally.

✓ I enjoy being a student as it gives me the chance to gain more knowledge and connect with new people online who share some interest in studying as well.

The verb 'connect' requires the preposition 'with' when referring to people. Also, 'additionally' is awkward here; 'as well' is more natural to express 'also'. Therefore, 'connect new people' should be 'connect with new people', and 'additionally' should be replaced with 'as well'.

× If I can use my English skill regularly, I think it is a good place to work over there, which helps me improve and feel confident.

✓ If I can use my English skills regularly, I think it is a good place to work, which helps me improve and feel confident.

The phrase 'English skill' should be pluralized to 'English skills' to sound natural. Also, 'over there' is unnecessary and awkward in this context; removing it improves clarity. The modal verb 'can' is used correctly here, so no change is needed for that.

× Also, the environment is supportive and encourage communication, so I must feel comfortable develop my ability there.

✓ Also, the environment is supportive and encourages communication, so I must feel comfortable developing my ability there.

The verb 'encourage' should be in the third person singular form 'encourages' to agree with the singular subject 'environment'. The phrase 'feel comfortable develop' is incorrect; after 'feel comfortable', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'develop' becomes 'developing'. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and verb form after 'feel comfortable'.

× Of course, if my place is close where I live, I must like it, although it's important that the work environment is freely and supportive with the colleagues who get along well.

✓ Of course, if my workplace is close to where I live, I would like it, although it's important that the work environment is free and supportive with colleagues who get along well.

'Place' is vague; 'workplace' is more appropriate. The phrase 'close where I live' needs the preposition 'to' to become 'close to where I live'. The modal verb 'must' is incorrectly used to express preference; 'would' is more suitable here. 'Freely' is an adverb but an adjective 'free' is needed to describe 'environment'. Also, 'the colleagues' should be 'colleagues' without 'the' for general reference. These corrections improve preposition use, modal verb usage, adjective use, and article use.

× If the workload is manageable, I think I will really enjoy working over there.

✓ If the workload is manageable, I think I will really enjoy working there.

The phrase 'working over there' is awkward; 'working there' is more natural and correct. The preposition 'over' is unnecessary in this context and should be removed.

× In the future, I would like to work aboard to improve my English skills and gain international experience.

✓ In the future, I would like to work abroad to improve my English skills and gain international experience.

The word 'aboard' means 'on or onto a ship, aircraft, or other vehicle' and is incorrect here. The correct word is 'abroad', meaning 'in or to a foreign country'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar tense issue, but correcting it is essential for clarity.