Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response first, then add one or two supporting details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: I am currently working in a large multinational company. I completed my education abroad, which helped me secure a well-paid job here.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat unclear. Use correct verb forms and organise your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise.

Ví dụ: I work at a company located about 3 kilometers from my home. I usually travel there by my own vehicle, but there are also many public transport options available.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, give specific examples of the facilities or activities to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because it offers many facilities like a well-equipped office and recreational activities that motivate me to perform better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and provide more varied vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my workplace because it has essential facilities like air conditioning, which creates a comfortable environment for everyone to work efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using better sentence structure and vocabulary. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to start my own business. Specifically, I want to open a bakery because I enjoy making different types of cakes and have the necessary skills.

× I am a worker and now I do work in multinational company which is very big company and I complete my all the education from abroad then I get a high paid job in multinational corporations.

✓ I am a worker and now I work in a multinational company which is a very big company and I completed all my education abroad then I got a high paid job in multinational corporations.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'multinational company' needing an article 'a' and 'complete my all the education' should be 'completed all my education'. Also, 'get' should be past tense 'got' to match the sequence of events. Use 'work' instead of 'do work' for natural expression.

× I am work in a company which is located near my home and the difference between the company and my home is 2 to 4 kilometer which I easily cover by my vehicle and there are a lot of public facilities public vehicle which provide facility to me.

✓ I work in a company which is located near my home and the distance between the company and my home is 2 to 4 kilometers which I easily cover by my vehicle and there are a lot of public facilities and public vehicles which provide facilities to me.

The phrase 'I am work' is incorrect; it should be 'I work' (simple present). 'Difference' should be 'distance' when referring to space between two places. 'Kilometer' should be plural 'kilometers' for more than one. 'Public vehicle' should be plural 'public vehicles' and 'provide facility to me' should be 'provide facilities to me' for correct plural usage.

× Yes, definitely it is good place to work because there are lots of facilities which help me to do my work in effective and efficient way.

✓ Yes, definitely it is a good place to work because there are lots of facilities which help me to do my work in an effective and efficient way.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'good place'. Also, 'effective and efficient way' needs the article 'an' before it because 'effective' starts with a vowel sound.

× Also there are different type of activities which encourage me to do effective work.

✓ Also there are different types of activities which encourage me to do effective work.

'Different type' should be plural 'different types' because 'activities' is plural, so the modifier should agree in number.

× Yes, I like the place where I work because there are facilities which encourage me to work.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because there are facilities that encourage me to work.

While 'which' is not incorrect, 'that' is more appropriate for defining clauses referring to facilities. No major plural or singular issue here, but this improves clarity.

× For example, air conditioner is basic and needed facility for every individual and maintain a suitable environment for people to do work.

✓ For example, an air conditioner is a basic and needed facility for every individual and maintains a suitable environment for people to work.

'Air conditioner' needs the article 'an' before it. 'Basic and needed facility' needs 'a' before it. The verb 'maintain' should be 'maintains' to agree with the singular subject 'an air conditioner'. 'Do work' is better expressed as 'work'.

× My future work plan is that I like to open my own business which is very helpful for me in my future.

✓ My future work plan is that I would like to open my own business which will be very helpful for me in the future.

'I like to open' should be 'I would like to open' to express future intention politely. 'Which is very helpful' should be 'which will be very helpful' to indicate future benefit. 'In my future' is better expressed as 'in the future'.

× For example, I like to open a bakery shop because I like different type of cake and also I know the skill how to make cake that's why I like to open.

✓ For example, I would like to open a bakery shop because I like different types of cakes and also I know the skill of how to make cakes; that's why I want to open one.

'Different type of cake' should be plural 'different types of cakes' to match plural meaning. 'I like to open' should be 'I would like to open' for polite future intention. 'I know the skill how to make cake' should be 'I know the skill of how to make cakes'. The sentence ending is incomplete and needs clarification.