Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm currently a student at Beijing Normal Dash, Hong Kong Baptist University, majoring in Cinema and television. Actually, I was an accounting student at first, but later I realized I was passionate about film and theater performance, so I decided to transfer my program to cinema and television.
Giám khảo
Where do you work?>
Thí sinh
I don't work actually, I'm a student currently.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to work?
Thí sinh
You mean my school? I think it's a good place to work 'cause, umm, the Staffs in our school are really energetic and I can see that they are very creative and really love their job.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you work?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I don't work. I am currently a senior student.
Giám khảo
What are your future work plans?
Thí sinh
Umm, I really think about it. Umm I was always dreaming of becoming a creative producer in the future, so I would spare effort to to have an internship during my master.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,表达了转专业的经历,语言自然流畅。但部分表达不够简洁,且“Beijing Normal Dash”可能是口误,应为“Beijing Normal University”。建议注意发音准确性和简洁表达。
Ví dụ: I'm currently a student at Beijing Normal University and Hong Kong Baptist University, majoring in Cinema and Television. Initially, I studied accounting, but I realized my passion lies in film and theater, so I switched my major.
Where do you work?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,直接回应问题,语言自然。可以稍微丰富内容,使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: I don't work at the moment because I'm a full-time student focusing on my studies.
Is it a good place to work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,表达了对学校工作人员的看法,但语法错误(Staffs应为Staff),口语填充词较多,影响流畅度。建议减少口语填充词,注意单复数形式。
Ví dụ: If you mean my school, I think it's a great place to work because the staff are energetic, creative, and passionate about their jobs.
Would you like the place where you work?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且诚实,但较为简短。可以适当扩展,表达对未来工作的期待或态度,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: Actually, I don't work now since I'm a senior student, but I hope to find a workplace that is inspiring and supportive in the future.
What are your future work plans?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了未来职业目标,但有重复词汇(to to),口语填充词较多,语法和表达不够准确。建议减少填充词,注意语法,表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I have always dreamed of becoming a creative producer, so I plan to work hard and secure an internship during my master's degree to gain relevant experience.
× the Staffs in our school are really energetic
✓ the staff in our school are really energetic
“Staff”作为集合名词,表示全体员工时通常用单数形式,不加复数-s。这里用“Staffs”是错误的,应改为“staff”。