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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

I'm currently a student at Beijing Normal Dash, Hong Kong Baptist University, majoring in Cinema and television. Actually, I was an accounting student at first, but later I realized I was passionate about film and theater performance, so I decided to transfer my program to cinema and television.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

I don't work actually, I'm a student currently.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

You mean my school? I think it's a good place to work 'cause, umm, the Staffs in our school are really energetic and I can see that they are very creative and really love their job.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I don't work. I am currently a senior student.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

Umm, I really think about it. Umm I was always dreaming of becoming a creative producer in the future, so I would spare effort to to have an internship during my master.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,表达了转专业的经历,语言自然流畅。但部分表达不够简洁,且“Beijing Normal Dash”可能是口误,应为“Beijing Normal University”。建议注意发音准确性和简洁表达。

Ví dụ: I'm currently a student at Beijing Normal University and Hong Kong Baptist University, majoring in Cinema and Television. Initially, I studied accounting, but I realized my passion lies in film and theater, so I switched my major.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,直接回应问题,语言自然。可以稍微丰富内容,使回答更完整。

Ví dụ: I don't work at the moment because I'm a full-time student focusing on my studies.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,表达了对学校工作人员的看法,但语法错误(Staffs应为Staff),口语填充词较多,影响流畅度。建议减少口语填充词,注意单复数形式。

Ví dụ: If you mean my school, I think it's a great place to work because the staff are energetic, creative, and passionate about their jobs.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且诚实,但较为简短。可以适当扩展,表达对未来工作的期待或态度,使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't work now since I'm a senior student, but I hope to find a workplace that is inspiring and supportive in the future.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了未来职业目标,但有重复词汇(to to),口语填充词较多,语法和表达不够准确。建议减少填充词,注意语法,表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I have always dreamed of becoming a creative producer, so I plan to work hard and secure an internship during my master's degree to gain relevant experience.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× the Staffs in our school are really energetic

the staff in our school are really energetic

“Staff”作为集合名词,表示全体员工时通常用单数形式,不加复数-s。这里用“Staffs”是错误的,应改为“staff”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
NormalUsual; Ordinary
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