Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. Instead of saying 'various learning disabilities such as dyslexia, intellectual disabilities, and many more,' you can mention a few examples and avoid 'many more' which sounds vague.

Ví dụ: I am currently working as a special educator at an organization where I train children with learning disabilities like dyslexia and intellectual disabilities.

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but a bit repetitive and lengthy. Try to make it more natural by combining ideas and using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I work at a vocational institute that specialises in training children with special needs, including intellectual disabilities, dyslexia, autism, and ADHD.

Gợi ý: Good answer with clear reasons. To improve, you can use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and add a bit more detail about what makes the staff considerate or how they support you.

Ví dụ: Definitely, my workplace is excellent for gaining experience early in my career because the staff and manager are very considerate; for instance, they provide guidance and support whenever I face challenges.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, 'sane' is not appropriate here; 'calm' or 'peaceful' would be better. Try to combine sentences for better flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy working there because my colleagues and manager are supportive. Moreover, the calm and peaceful environment helps me focus and train the children effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. To improve, use correct grammar, complete your thoughts, and use linking words to explain your plans clearly.

Ví dụ: My future aim is to become an expert in my profession, particularly in working with children who have ADHD and autism, as they often face difficulties with communication and concentration. Therefore, I am currently taking a professional course to develop the necessary skills.

× Currently, I am working as a special educator in an organization where I train children with various learning disabilities such as dyslexia, intellectual disabilities, and many more.

✓ Currently, I am working as a special educator at an organization where I train children with various learning disabilities such as dyslexia, intellectual disabilities, and many more.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'at' is commonly used to indicate working at a specific organization or company. Using 'at' clarifies the location of employment.

× Currently I am working in an organization which is basically a vocational institute where I train children with special needs, especially those having disabilities like intellectual disability, dyslexia, autism and ADHD.

✓ Currently I am working at an organization which is basically a vocational institute where I train children with special needs, especially those having disabilities like intellectual disability, dyslexia, autism and ADHD.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate the place of work rather than 'in'. 'At' specifies the organization as a place of employment.

× Yes, I enjoy working there because of colleagues and the manager. Apart from that, the environment is very sane and peaceful, where I can focus and concentrate on my work efficiently and can train children effectively.

✓ Yes, I enjoy working there because of the colleagues and the manager. Apart from that, the environment is very calm and peaceful, where I can focus and concentrate on my work efficiently and can train children effectively.

The word 'sane' is incorrectly used to describe the environment; 'calm' is the appropriate adjective to describe a peaceful and quiet environment. Also, 'the' is needed before 'colleagues' to specify particular people.

× My future aim is to become expertise in my profession, especially while dealing with children having ADHD and autism because they face difficulty in communication and concentration. So I am gaining skills from a professional course that.

✓ My future aim is to become an expert in my profession, especially while dealing with children having ADHD and autism because they face difficulty in communication and concentration. So I am gaining skills from a professional course.

The phrase 'become expertise' is incorrect; 'expertise' is a noun meaning skill or knowledge, while 'expert' is the correct noun to describe a person. Also, the last sentence was incomplete and needed correction by removing 'that' to complete the thought properly.