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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

I work and umm, I have been working as an English teacher for three years.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

I work at a large educational institution in Chengdu and I really enjoy helping my students to improve their language skills and I mainly responsible for teaching students from middle school to high school.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think it is a good place to work because since I joined three years ago, I have not only witnessed my great improvement in professional skills but also my English ability and I have received many great feedbacks in my job.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like the place where I am work now because I think my supervisor is really talented in management and also she really helped me to make progress in my work.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

Umm, I want to improve both my management skills and also my English, so I want to get more English ability certifications in the near future.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' to make your answer sound more confident and natural. Also, you can make your answer more effective by combining the information into one clear sentence without redundancy.

Ví dụ: I have been working as an English teacher for three years.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes, such as 'I am mainly responsible'. Also, avoid redundancy by focusing on the main points.

Ví dụ: I work at a large educational institution in Chengdu, where I mainly teach middle and high school students. I really enjoy helping them improve their language skills.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite long and contains some grammatical errors, such as 'great feedbacks' (should be 'great feedback'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'not only... but also' correctly, and try to make your sentences clearer and more concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because since I joined three years ago, I have not only improved my professional skills but also enhanced my English ability. Additionally, I have received positive feedback from my colleagues.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: There is a grammatical error in 'where I am work now' which should be 'where I work now'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' effectively and avoid repeating 'really'. Make your answer more natural and concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like the place where I work now because my supervisor is talented in management and has helped me make significant progress in my work.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'umm' to sound more confident. Use linking words like 'and' effectively and be more specific about the certifications you want to obtain to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: I want to improve both my management skills and English proficiency, so I plan to obtain advanced English certifications such as the Cambridge C1 or C2 in the near future.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I mainly responsible for teaching students from middle school to high school.

I am mainly responsible for teaching students from middle school to high school.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' to agree with the subject 'I'. In English, the subject and verb must agree, so 'I' requires the verb 'am' in this context to form the present continuous or present simple tense correctly.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I have received many great feedbacks in my job.

I have received much great feedback in my job.

The noun 'feedback' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised as 'feedbacks'. Instead, use 'much' with uncountable nouns and keep 'feedback' singular.

Present tense issue

× Yes, I like the place where I am work now because I think my supervisor is really talented in management and also she really helped me to make progress in my work.

Yes, I like the place where I work now because I think my supervisor is really talented in management and also she has really helped me to make progress in my work.

The phrase 'I am work' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I work' for present simple tense. Also, 'she really helped me' refers to past action, but since the help is relevant to the present, 'she has really helped me' (present perfect) is more appropriate.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
GreatConsiderable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
LargeBig; Abundant; Wide-reaching
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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