Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and clarify the franchise name to avoid confusion. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I work full-time as a shift leader at UMM, a well-known franchise. I manage daily operations and work about 30 to 40 hours each week.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but has some redundancy and minor grammar issues. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: I have been working at Wendy's, an American fast-food franchise, since 2020. A year ago, I was promoted to shift leader, where I oversee smooth shift operations.

Gợi ý: Your answer is positive but contains some repetition and filler words. Try to avoid repeating 'friendly' and 'morale' and use linking words to connect your points more effectively.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to work because the team is friendly and supportive. Moreover, the company offers incentives that boost my motivation.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat incomplete and repetitive. Avoid repeating previous points without adding new information. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy working here because of the supportive team and positive environment. Additionally, the company offers excellent incentives and many opportunities for professional growth, so I plan to stay long-term.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Use correct adverbs like 'often' instead of 'oftenly' and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to make your answer more fluent.

Ví dụ: I plan to continue working at Wendy's because they often promote employees, usually every four months. This provides better incentives and pay, making it a great company to work for.

× I am currently working full time as a shift leader in one of the famous franchise UMM.

✓ I am currently working full time as a shift leader in one of the famous franchises, UMM.

The word 'franchise' should be plural 'franchises' because it refers to one among many. Also, a comma is needed before the name 'UMM' to clarify the appositive.

× I am responsible for managing the operation smoothly and uh alongside I work around 30 to 40 hours per week.

✓ I am responsible for managing the operation smoothly and, alongside that, I work around 30 to 40 hours per week.

The phrase 'alongside I work' is incorrect. It should be 'alongside that, I work' to properly connect the ideas and use the preposition 'alongside' correctly.

× I work at Wendy's, one of the fast food a franchise from America and I I have been working here since 2020.

✓ I work at Wendy's, one of the fast food franchises from America, and I have been working here since 2020.

The phrase 'one of the fast food a franchise' is incorrect. It should be 'one of the fast food franchises' to correctly use the plural noun and article.

× I started my role of chief leader a year ago and in this role I am responsible for the smooth shift operations and managing.

✓ I started my role as chief leader a year ago, and in this role, I am responsible for smooth shift operations and management.

The phrase 'my role of chief leader' should be 'my role as chief leader'. Also, 'managing' is better replaced with 'management' to fit the noun phrase.

× Yes, it is a great place to work because the whole team is very nice and friendly, the workplace environment is uh, friendly and the team is very supportive.

✓ Yes, it is a great place to work because the whole team is very nice and friendly, the workplace environment is friendly, and the team is very supportive.

The sentence is mostly correct but removing the filler 'uh' improves clarity and flow.

× Moreover, the company provides incentives and which boost my morale, morale even more.

✓ Moreover, the company provides incentives which boost my morale even more.

The conjunction 'and which' is incorrect here. It should be either 'and' or 'which'. Using 'which' alone is appropriate to introduce the relative clause.

× Yes, I really enjoy working here. As I previously mentioned that the team is very supportive and the environment is very good. So also alongside with that, the company provides excellent incentives and plenty of opportunities for a professional growth.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy working here. As I previously mentioned, the team is very supportive and the environment is very good. Also, alongside that, the company provides excellent incentives and plenty of opportunities for professional growth.

The phrase 'alongside with that' is incorrect; 'alongside that' is correct. Also, 'a professional growth' should be 'professional growth' without the article.

× So definitely in future I.

✓ So definitely in the future, I plan to continue working here.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Adding 'plan to continue working here' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× My future work plan is to continue working with the Wendy's because they provide promotions very oftenly, like after four months they they always promote the person.

✓ My future work plan is to continue working with Wendy's because they provide promotions very often, like after four months they always promote the person.

The adverb 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'often'. Also, 'the Wendy's' should be 'Wendy's' without 'the'.

× So for better incentives and for better pay, it's a good company to work.

✓ So for better incentives and better pay, it's a good company to work for.

The phrase 'a good company to work' is incomplete; it should be 'a good company to work for' to be grammatically correct.