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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

Actually I'm a student right now. I am pursuing my computer degree. I am pursuing my computer course.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

Before I mentioned I am a student so I have. I don't have a work.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

I have no verbs, so I don't work.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I love the place where I work because this place is very eco friendly.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

I just want to open my own restaurant.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same information and make your response more natural by combining sentences. Also, add a little more detail to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: I am currently a student pursuing a degree in computer science, which I find very interesting and challenging.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Since you are a student and do not work, you should directly say that. Keep your answer simple and clear.

Ví dụ: I don't work at the moment because I am focusing on my studies as a full-time student.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Your answer does not address the question and is confusing. Since you do not work, you can explain that and perhaps mention your thoughts about a good workplace.

Ví dụ: I don't currently work, but I believe a good workplace should be comfortable and supportive.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is contradictory because earlier you said you don't work. Also, you should provide more details and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Although I don't work currently, I would love to work in a place that is eco-friendly because it shows care for the environment and promotes a healthy atmosphere.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but brief. You can improve by adding reasons or details about why you want to open a restaurant to make your answer more interesting and complete.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to open my own restaurant because I enjoy cooking and want to share my passion for food with others.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I don't have a work.

I don't have work.

In English, 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to employment or tasks, so it should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Saying 'a work' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I don't have work.'

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I have no verbs, so I don't work.

I have no job, so I don't work.

The word 'verbs' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'job' or 'work'. 'Verbs' are parts of speech, not employment. Using the correct noun 'job' clarifies the meaning and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
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