Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ хороший, но есть небольшие ошибки в грамматике и стилистике. Постарайтесь использовать более естественные выражения и избегать повторов, например, "Student school" звучит неестественно. Также старайтесь делать предложения более связными и логичными.

Ví dụ: I am currently a high school student focusing on subjects such as Armenian and Russian. I enjoy studying because it prepares me well for my future career. Additionally, school gives me the opportunity to meet new people and develop important skills, which I really appreciate.

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и избегать излишних повторов. Также старайтесь строить предложения более связно и логично, используя связующие слова.

Ví dụ: I don't work because I am a student. I study various subjects at school, including Armenian, Russian, and mathematics. I enjoy these subjects because they help me prepare for my future.

Gợi ý: Ответ не соответствует вопросу, так как вы повторяете, что не работаете, вместо того чтобы описать, если бы вы работали, было бы хорошее место. Постарайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос и использовать связные предложения.

Ví dụ: Although I don't work yet because I am still a student, I believe that a good workplace should be comfortable and supportive, allowing employees to grow and develop their skills.

Gợi ý: Ответ не совсем соответствует вопросу. Следует предположить, если бы вы работали, понравилось бы вам это место, и объяснить почему. Используйте связные предложения и избегайте повторов.

Ví dụ: Since I don't work yet, I can't say for sure, but I would like to work in a place that is friendly and encourages learning, as I believe this would help me develop my career.

Gợi ý: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и нечеткость. Следует использовать правильные времена и более точные выражения. Также старайтесь давать более развернутый ответ с деталями.

Ví dụ: I am 17 years old and I have already decided on my future career. I want to become a lawyer and I am determined to work hard to achieve this goal.

× I study more different subjects.

✓ I study many different subjects.

The phrase 'more different subjects' is incorrect because 'more' is used for comparisons and 'different' already implies variety. The correct quantifier here is 'many' to indicate a large number of subjects.

× I like Armenian, Russian, mathematics and more different subjects.

✓ I like Armenian, Russian, mathematics, and other different subjects.

The phrase 'more different subjects' is incorrect. 'More' is used for comparisons, but here 'other' is appropriate to indicate additional subjects.

× I have even find my future jobs.

✓ I have not yet found my future job.

The phrase 'have even find' is incorrect. The correct present perfect form is 'have found'. Also, 'jobs' should be singular 'job' because usually one future career is referred to.

× I studying in the school in Armenia.

✓ I am studying at school in Armenia.

The verb 'studying' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'in the school' should be 'at school' for correct preposition usage.

× I everyday love studying in for my future.

✓ I love studying every day for my future.

The adverb 'everyday' is incorrectly placed and 'in for' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'every day' as two words and 'for my future'.

× I don't work because I student, I study at school.

✓ I don't work because I am a student; I study at school.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the correct sentence. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× I love it because it I do it for my future.

✓ I love it because I do it for my future.

The phrase 'it I do it' is incorrect and redundant. The correct sentence removes the extra 'it'.

× I live in Armenian and I study at school.

✓ I live in Armenia and I study at school.

The country name is 'Armenia', not 'Armenian'. 'Armenian' is an adjective or nationality, so the correct preposition phrase is 'live in Armenia'.

× I study at high school and I everyday love studying in for my future.

✓ I study at high school and I love studying every day for my future.

The phrase 'in for my future' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'for my future'. Also, 'everyday' should be 'every day' and placed correctly.

× I really want to work to it.

✓ I really want to work at it.

The phrase 'work to it' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'work at it' when referring to working on something.