Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有语义不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I currently run a small bakery where I sell desserts like chocolate cakes and cheesecakes. I really enjoy my work because baking gives me a great sense of satisfaction.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如主谓不一致，且表达略显重复。建议注意主谓一致，使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I work at a small bakery in the city center, which is close to my home. The working environment is friendly, and my coworkers treat me like family.

Gợi ý: 句子结构较复杂且表达不够清晰，建议使用更简洁的句子，并且注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to work because I own the bakery. This allows me to have flexible working hours and maintain a good work-life balance.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，并且注意词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy working there because I can experiment with different desserts every day. Seeing the finished products gives me a great sense of satisfaction.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但可以使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I want to improve my baking skills so that I can offer even tastier desserts to my customers. Therefore, I plan to go to France to learn advanced baking techniques.

× I'm very satisfied with my work because every time when I see my hand make cakes, I feel a lot of sense of.

✓ I'm very satisfied with my work because every time when I see my hands making cakes, I feel a great sense of satisfaction.

这里动词短语需要使用现在分词形式来表示正在进行的动作，'make' 应改为 'making'。另外，'hand' 应为复数 'hands'，'a lot of sense of' 结构不完整，应改为 'a great sense of satisfaction'。

× The working environment are very friendly and nice.

✓ The working environment is very friendly and nice.

主语 'environment' 是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'is'，而不是复数 'are'。

× All my coworkers are very friendly making me feel like a part of family.

✓ All my coworkers are very friendly, making me feel like a part of the family.

缺少逗号导致句子结构不清晰，'part of family' 应加定冠词 'the'，表示特指。

× Yes for sure, because that is my own bakery which means I have a wide range of flexible time I can allocate my time, making sure better balance between work and life.

✓ Yes, for sure, because that is my own bakery which means I have a wide range of flexible time and I can allocate my time, making sure a better balance between work and life.

缺少连词 'and' 连接两个并列句，'making sure better balance' 中缺少冠词 'a'。

× Yeah, I'm quite enjoying where I work because I can.

✓ Yeah, I'm quite enjoying where I work because I can experiment with different kinds of desserts every day.

句子不完整，'because I can' 后缺少具体内容，导致表达不清楚。

× Every day I can experiment with different kinds of desserts and see their desserts finally finished, which makes me feel a great sense of satisfaction.

✓ Every day I can experiment with different kinds of desserts and see them finally finished, which makes me feel a great sense of satisfaction.

'see their desserts finally finished' 中 'their desserts' 指代不明，应改为 'them' 指代前文的 desserts。

× I really want to improve my baking skills, which helps me provide tasty desserts to my clients.

✓ I really want to improve my baking skills, which will help me provide tasty desserts to my clients.

这里应使用将来时态 'will help' 表示未来的帮助，而不是一般现在时 'helps'。