Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more natural phrasing and avoid minor grammatical errors. For example, say "I only have one year left before I start university" and "I'm putting a lot of effort into my assignments". Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I'm currently a junior high school student, so I have just one year left before I start university. At the moment, I'm putting a lot of effort into my assignments because soon I'll need to decide on my major. I'm considering studying finance or business because they interest me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like "Uh" and try to link your ideas more clearly. For example, use linking words like "also" or "in addition" to connect your points.

Ví dụ: I'm a full-time student at the moment, so I spend most of my time studying and gaining knowledge. In addition, I'm focusing on improving my social skills to prepare for my future career.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too brief and unclear. Even if you are unsure about the question, try to respond politely and ask for clarification in a natural way. For example, you could say, "Could you please clarify which place you mean?"

Ví dụ: I'm sorry, could you please clarify which place you are referring to?

Gợi ý: Your answer is polite and informative, but the phrasing could be more natural. Try to combine your ideas into fewer sentences and use linking words like "because" and "and" to improve flow.

Ví dụ: If you mean my learning environment, I would say it's a great place to study because it's peaceful and has fresh air, and it also provides adequate digital tools for my research.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but could be more natural by avoiding phrases like "if you ask me" and simplifying expressions. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: At the moment, I'm not certain about my exact career path, but I would prefer to work in the finance or commerce sectors because they suit my skills and my family's background.

× I'm currently a junior high school student, which means I only have one year left before start university.

✓ I'm currently a junior high school student, which means I only have one year left before starting university.

The verb 'start' should be in the gerund form 'starting' after the preposition 'before' to indicate the action that will happen in the future. Using the base form 'start' is incorrect here.

× Recently I'm putting a lot of efforts into my assignments and in the following months I will decide to choose my major.

✓ Recently I'm putting a lot of effort into my assignments and in the following months I will decide on my major.

The phrase 'a lot of efforts' is incorrect; 'effort' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised here. Also, the verb 'decide' is usually followed by the preposition 'on' when referring to making a choice, so 'decide to choose' is redundant and incorrect.

× I'm currently a full time student so I just want to spend most of my time on studying and acquiring knowledge.

✓ I'm currently a full-time student so I just want to spend most of my time studying and acquiring knowledge.

The phrase 'spend time on studying' is less natural; after 'spend time', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'on'. Also, 'full time' should be hyphenated as 'full-time' when used as an adjective.

× Also the adequate digital tools for me to research.

✓ Also, there are adequate digital tools for me to research.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a verb. Adding 'there are' completes the sentence. Also, a comma after 'Also' improves clarity.