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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

Thank you for this, uh, nice topic. Uh, presently I'm a student at this pathological university, my pursuits for three years, but sometimes I work, uh, uh, through my, uh, special occupation.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

Well, I am working at school nowadays because because my bachelor degree is for teachers and so at present I am teaching English lessons for my peoples.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I don't like this place for my work because nervous especially, especially primarily school guys is very nervous and very little so I don't like this place.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

Well, I tend to another place for my work, especially good facilities such as air condition and a lot of calm and peaceful place for my work. This.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

Thank you for this nice topic, my turning to my future plans especially I love to the best teacher for my pupils in the future is good for me and the best intent for now.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Жавобингизда кўп такрорланишлар ва тўхталишлар бор, бу нутқингизни табиий ва самарали қилмайди. Жавобингизни қисқа ва аниқ қилиб, асосий маълумотни берасиз. Масалан, "Ҳозирда мен патология университетида уч йиллик талабаман ва баъзан махсус касбим бўйича ишлайман."

Ví dụ: Currently, I am a student at a pathology university, studying for three years. Occasionally, I work in my specialized field.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Жавобингизда такрорланишлар ва грамматик хатолар бор. Жавобингизни тўғри ва аниқ қилиб, боғловчи сўзлардан фойдаланинг. Масалан, "Ҳозирда мактабда ишлаяпман, чунки бакалавр даражам ўқитувчиликка оид ва мен инглиз тили дарсларини ўтиб келяпман."

Ví dụ: I am currently working at a school because my bachelor's degree is in teaching, so I am teaching English lessons to my students.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Жавобингизда тушунарсизлик ва грамматик хатолар бор. Жавобингизни аниқ ва мантиқий қилиб, сабабларини тушунарли қилиб изоҳланг. Масалан, "Ҳақиқатан ҳам, мен бу жойни ёқтирмайман, чунки ўқувчилар жуда асабий ва ёш бўлиб, ишлаш қийин."

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like working here because the students are very nervous and young, which makes the environment stressful.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Жавобингизда гапларни тўлиқ ва аниқ ифодалаш керак. Боғловчи сўзлардан фойдаланинг ва сабабларни тушунарли қилиб беринг. Масалан, "Мен иш жойимни ўзгартиришни хоҳлайман, чунки яхши шароитлар, масалан, кондиционер ва тинч муҳит мен учун муҳим."

Ví dụ: I would prefer to work in a different place that has good facilities like air conditioning and a calm, peaceful environment.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Жавобингизда гаплар тушунарсиз ва грамматик хатолар кўп. Жавобингизни аниқ ва қисқа қилиб, келажак режаларингизни тушунарли ифодаланг. Масалан, "Келажакда мен ўз ўқувчиларим учун энг яхши ўқитувчи бўлишни хоҳлайман."

Ví dụ: In the future, I want to become the best teacher for my students.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× presently I'm a student at this pathological university, my pursuits for three years, but sometimes I work, uh, uh, through my, uh, special occupation.

Presently, I'm a student at this pedagogical university; I have been studying for three years, but sometimes I work through my special occupation.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'pursuits' instead of 'studying' or 'studies' and has awkward phrasing. The verb tense should reflect ongoing action ('have been studying') to indicate duration. Also, 'pathological' is likely a mispronunciation of 'pedagogical.' The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

Present tense issue

× Well, I am working at school nowadays because because my bachelor degree is for teachers and so at present I am teaching English lessons for my peoples.

Well, I am working at a school nowadays because my bachelor's degree is in teaching, so at present I am teaching English lessons to my students.

The phrase 'my bachelor degree is for teachers' is incorrect; it should be 'my bachelor's degree is in teaching.' Also, 'for my peoples' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to my students.' The article 'a' is needed before 'school.' The sentence is corrected for proper preposition and article use.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I am teaching English lessons for my peoples.

I am teaching English lessons to my students.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to indicate the recipients of teaching is 'to.' Also, 'peoples' is incorrect in this context; 'students' is the appropriate noun.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× To be honest, I don't like this place for my work because nervous especially, especially primarily school guys is very nervous and very little so I don't like this place.

To be honest, I don't like this place for my work because it is stressful; especially, the school children are very nervous and young, so I don't like this place.

The original sentence has awkward and incorrect adjective and noun usage. 'Nervous' is used incorrectly to describe the place; 'stressful' is more appropriate. 'School guys' is informal and unclear; 'school children' is better. 'Very little' is incorrect; 'young' is the correct adjective. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I tend to another place for my work, especially good facilities such as air condition and a lot of calm and peaceful place for my work.

I prefer to work in another place, especially one with good facilities such as air conditioning and a calm and peaceful environment.

The phrase 'I tend to another place for my work' is incorrect; 'I prefer to work in another place' is better. 'Air condition' should be 'air conditioning.' 'A lot of calm and peaceful place' is ungrammatical; 'a calm and peaceful environment' is correct. Prepositions and noun forms are corrected.

Future tense issue

× my turning to my future plans especially I love to the best teacher for my pupils in the future is good for me and the best intent for now.

Regarding my future plans, I especially want to be the best teacher for my pupils; this is important to me and my main goal now.

The original sentence has incorrect future tense and awkward phrasing. 'I love to the best teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to be the best teacher.' The sentence is restructured to express future intentions clearly and grammatically.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BestFinest; To the highest standard
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
NiceEnjoyable; Pleasant; Polite; Subtle; Fine
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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