Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi phát âm. Ví dụ, bạn nên nói rõ bạn là giáo viên mầm non và mô tả công việc một cách đơn giản, dễ hiểu.

Ví dụ: I am a kindergarten teacher at a school on Weaponry Street in Jimmy City. I mainly take care of and teach children under four years old.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn để trả lời câu hỏi về nơi làm việc hiện tại. Ngoài ra, hãy nói rõ tên và địa điểm trường một cách chính xác và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh dùng thì quá khứ khi bạn vẫn đang làm việc ở đó.

Ví dụ: I work at Kitchen Kindergarten, which is located on Main Street in Hochman City.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có lỗi lặp từ và câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn. Hãy nói rõ lý do bạn thích nơi làm việc và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because it is very close to my home, so I don't have to spend much time commuting.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời để tránh bị ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và nói rõ hơn về những điều bạn thích ở nơi làm việc. Ngoài ra, từ vựng nên chính xác và phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. I enjoy my job because I feel excited and full of energy when I meet the children every day. In addition, I learn a lot of new knowledge and skills from my colleagues and the school.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng thì tương lai để nói về kế hoạch và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và đầy đủ hơn.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I am still working here. However, I plan to study in Australia next year, so I will move there.

× My daily works in at a school the mainly taking care and teaching children, especially children under the age 4 year old.

✓ My daily work at the school mainly involves taking care of and teaching children, especially children under the age of 4 years old.

The word 'works' is incorrect here because 'work' as a noun referring to tasks or duties is uncountable and should be singular. Also, '4 year old' should be '4 years old' to correctly express age in plural form.

× My daily works in at a school the mainly taking care and teaching children, especially children under the age 4 year old.

✓ My daily work at the school mainly involves taking care of and teaching children, especially children under the age of 4 years old.

The preposition 'in at' is incorrect; the correct preposition to indicate location is 'at'. Also, 'taking care and teaching' requires 'of' after 'care' to be grammatically correct.

× I was at Kitchen Kindergarten, which is located on Main Street Literature, Hochman City.

✓ I work at Kitchen Kindergarten, which is located on Main Street Literature, Hochman City.

The question asks about current work, so the present tense 'work' should be used instead of past tense 'was'.

× Yes, it is a good place to work because it is very close to my home so I don't have very so I don't have to spend much time commuting.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because it is very close to my home, so I don't have to spend much time commuting.

The phrase 'I don't have very so I don't have' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'I don't have to' to express necessity properly.

× The more interesting thing about my job is that every day when I go to work, I always feel excited and full of energy when meeting the children I In addition, I get to learn a lot of new knowledge and skills from my college and school.

✓ The most interesting thing about my job is that every day when I go to work, I always feel excited and full of energy when meeting the children. In addition, I get to learn a lot of new knowledge and skills from my colleagues and school.

The phrase 'The more interesting thing' should be 'The most interesting thing' to express superlative degree. Also, 'I In addition' is incomplete and should be separated into two sentences. 'College' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'colleagues' meaning coworkers.

× To be honest, I'm still working at here. 1st I have plan, I have plan to start two other study in Australia next year, so I will move.

✓ To be honest, I'm still working here. First, I have a plan to start another study in Australia next year, so I will move.

The phrase 'working at here' is incorrect; 'working here' is correct. '1st' should be spelled out as 'First'. 'I have plan' needs an article 'a' to be 'I have a plan'. 'Two other study' is incorrect; it should be 'another study' or 'two other studies' depending on meaning.