Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada pengulangan kata "I am a student" yang bisa dihindari untuk membuat jawaban lebih alami dan efektif. Selain itu, perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan jelas.

Ví dụ: I am currently studying statistics and data science at IBB University. I really enjoy it because it allows me to explore subjects I'm passionate about and develop skills important for my future career.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dengan baik dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Sebaiknya langsung jawab pertanyaan dengan kalimat utama, kemudian jelaskan pengalaman kerja dengan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terhubung.

Ví dụ: I am currently a student at IBB University, so I am not working now. However, I previously worked as a data analyst, which helped me improve my analytical skills.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda agak berulang dan kurang terstruktur. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan alami.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider it a good place to work because I can explore various aspects of data analysis and collaborate with supportive friends.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Sebaiknya jawab langsung dengan kalimat yang jelas dan alami, misalnya menjelaskan bahwa Anda belum bekerja saat ini.

Ví dụ: Since I am not currently working, I cannot say whether I would like the workplace or not.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengulangan. Perbaiki kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan rencana masa depan Anda.

Ví dụ: In the future, I want to become a researcher specializing in AI. To achieve this, I plan to pursue a PhD.

× I am a student at IBB University where I studied about statistics and data science and I really enjoyed being a student because it allows me to explore subject that I'm passionate about and develop important for my future career.

✓ I am a student at IBB University where I studied statistics and data science and I really enjoyed being a student because it allows me to explore subjects that I'm passionate about and develop skills important for my future career.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to multiple areas of study. Also, 'develop important' is incomplete; it should be 'develop skills important' to make sense. Plural forms are needed to correctly express multiple items or concepts.

× Well currently I am a student at IBB University so I'm not working but I have a previous work experience where I become a data analyst and it helped me.

✓ Well, currently I am a student at IBB University so I'm not working but I have previous work experience where I became a data analyst and it helped me.

The verb 'become' should be in the past tense 'became' to correctly indicate a past event. Using the correct past tense is essential to maintain proper time reference in the sentence.

× To improve my skills into the analyze subject.

✓ To improve my skills in analyzing subjects.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; 'in' is the correct preposition to indicate the area of skill improvement. Also, 'analyze subject' is incorrect; it should be 'analyzing subjects' to use the gerund form and plural noun appropriately.

× I can study many things about data analyzes especially, and I can work with my friends, which is so supportive.

✓ I can study many things about data analysis especially, and I can work with my friends, who are very supportive.

'Data analyzes' is incorrect; the correct term is 'data analysis' which is uncountable. Also, 'which is so supportive' should be 'who are very supportive' because 'friends' is plural and refers to people, so 'who' and plural verb 'are' are needed.

× I am not working so I don't know if I love the work please or not.

✓ I am not working so I don't know if I would love the workplace or not.

'Work please' is incorrect; it should be 'workplace' to refer to the place of work. Also, 'if I love' should be 'if I would love' to express a hypothetical situation. Correct pronoun and word choice improve clarity.

× Well, I want to become a researcher in I and I want to studies about AI mores.

✓ Well, I want to become a researcher in AI and I want to study more about AI.

'Studies' should be 'study' because after 'want to' the base form of the verb is used. 'AI mores' is incorrect; it should be 'more about AI' to express additional knowledge. Correct verb form and word choice are necessary.

× So if you ask me about what my future work plans.

✓ So, if you ask me about my future work plans,

This is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause. Adding a comma and connecting it properly to the next sentence or completing the thought is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× So I want to pursue a PhD so that I can become a research.

✓ So I want to pursue a PhD so that I can become a researcher.

'Research' is a noun; the correct noun for a person is 'researcher'. Using the correct noun form is important for clarity and grammatical correctness.