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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

Currently I am a student. I'm not working.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

I work as a part time job. I don't get me. Near my home where I Peach. English language.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

Yes, it is a good place to work as it has a peaceful environment. And colleagues are very friendly and the students are very respectful. So yeah, I like to work there. And I'm working there as from a past two years.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like the place. As I told you before that the environment is so peaceful and people there are so kindly, so kind. Not kindly, I mean they are kind and they know how to behave. With everyone, so yeah.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

Uh, my future work plan is to study in Germany and there I will do a part time job. I'm thinking about a teacher. I'm thinking about the teaching job, so yeah, I'm looking for that. I'm looking forward for that.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but a bit short. Try to add a little more detail to make it more natural and effective. For example, you can mention what you are studying or your current focus as a student.

Ví dụ: Currently, I am a student studying computer science at university. I am focusing on improving my programming skills and preparing for my future career.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple and correct sentences to explain where you work and what you do.

Ví dụ: I work part-time near my home at an English language center where I help students practice speaking.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and correcting grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because it has a peaceful environment. Moreover, my colleagues are friendly, and the students are respectful. I have been working there for the past two years, and I enjoy it.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and minor errors. Try to use linking words and avoid repeating the same ideas. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like the place because the environment is peaceful and the people are kind and respectful towards everyone.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and try to make your sentences more fluent.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to study in Germany and work part-time there. I am considering a teaching job because I enjoy helping others learn, and I am looking forward to this opportunity.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I work as a part time job.

I work a part-time job.

The phrase 'work as a part time job' is incorrect because 'work' is a verb and 'part-time job' is a noun phrase. The correct expression is 'work a part-time job' without 'as'. Also, 'part-time' should be hyphenated as it is a compound adjective.

Sentence structure errors

× I don't get me.

I don't understand.

The sentence 'I don't get me' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I don't understand'. 'Get' can mean 'understand' informally, but 'get me' is incorrect here.

Sentence structure errors

× Near my home where I Peach. English language.

Near my home where I teach English.

The sentence is fragmented and contains a wrong word 'Peach' instead of 'teach'. The corrected sentence is 'Near my home where I teach English.' to make it complete and meaningful.

Incorrect use of conjunction

× And colleagues are very friendly and the students are very respectful.

The colleagues are very friendly and the students are very respectful.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and not preferred in formal speech. Also, 'colleagues' needs a definite article 'The' to specify which colleagues are being talked about.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And I'm working there as from a past two years.

And I've been working there for the past two years.

The phrase 'as from a past two years' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'for' to indicate duration, and the present perfect continuous tense 'I've been working' fits the context of an action continuing up to now.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× people there are so kindly, so kind. Not kindly, I mean they are kind

People there are so kind.

'Kindly' is an adverb meaning 'in a kind manner', but here the adjective 'kind' is needed to describe 'people'. The repetition and correction in the sentence indicate confusion between 'kind' and 'kindly'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I'm looking forward for that.

I'm looking forward to that.

The correct preposition after 'looking forward' is 'to', not 'for'. The phrase should be 'looking forward to' something.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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