Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Hãy giới thiệu công việc và việc học của bạn một cách trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích thêm về cảm nhận của bạn với từng vai trò.

Ví dụ: I am both working and studying. I work as an English teacher for kids, and I am also a computer science student. I enjoy both roles because they help me grow. I try to balance them well so I can succeed in both areas.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Tránh lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy mô tả nơi làm việc cụ thể và vị trí của nó so với nhà bạn một cách mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I work at an English center located downtown in the city. It is not very far from my house, but it is not very close either. The commute takes about 30 minutes.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh nói lặp lại. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do tại sao nơi làm việc đó tốt và những kỹ năng bạn học được. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because I can develop my skills there. Although I have no experience before, I am learning every day. I hope to find better opportunities in the future.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như "you know" và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn. Hãy nêu rõ những điểm bạn thích về nơi làm việc và kỹ năng bạn học được, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy.

Ví dụ: I really like my workplace because it gives me a good salary and valuable experience with my students. Moreover, I have learned both soft skills, like communication, and hard skills, such as lesson preparation and managing my salary.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và tránh ngắt quãng câu. Hãy trình bày kế hoạch tương lai một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to continue working as an English teacher. However, I also want to find a job that offers a higher and more rewarding salary, which would greatly benefit me.

× I'm working at English teacher for kids and a student majoring in computer science.

✓ I'm working as an English teacher for kids and am a student majoring in computer science.

The phrase 'working at English teacher' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'as' when referring to a job role. Also, 'and a student' should be connected properly with 'am' to maintain parallel structure. Suggestion: use 'working as an English teacher' and 'am a student'. (Lỗi sử dụng giới từ sai và cấu trúc câu không song song)

× I love both of the work them having right now.

✓ I love both of the work I am doing right now.

The phrase 'both of the work them having' is incorrect. 'Them' is an object pronoun and does not fit here. The sentence should refer to the work the speaker is doing. Suggestion: use 'I am doing' to clarify the subject. (Lỗi sử dụng đại từ không đúng)

× I feel like I could balance both of them in the right way for me to thrive in a.

✓ I feel like I can balance both of them in the right way to thrive.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'in a' which is incomplete and unclear. Also, 'could' suggests possibility but 'can' is more appropriate here. Suggestion: complete the sentence and clarify the meaning. (Lỗi cấu trúc câu không hoàn chỉnh)

× I work, I work as an English center in downtown of the economic powerhouse.

✓ I work at an English center in the downtown area of the economic powerhouse.

'Work as an English center' is incorrect because 'center' is a place, not a role. The correct preposition is 'at' for places. Also, 'downtown of' should be 'downtown area of'. Suggestion: use 'work at an English center in the downtown area'. (Lỗi sử dụng giới từ không đúng)

× When you say and I say that.

✓ When you say that, and I say that too.

This sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be connected properly to express the intended meaning. Suggestion: complete the sentence for clarity. (Lỗi cấu trúc câu)

× The location of my work place is quite not so far, but not really close to my house.

✓ The location of my workplace is not too far, but not really close to my house.

'Quite not so far' is awkward and incorrect. Use 'not too far' for clarity. Also, 'work place' should be one word 'workplace'. Suggestion: correct preposition and word form. (Lỗi sử dụng giới từ và từ sai)

× Yes, is has always been a good place for me to thrive and for me to develop my skill, especially for me who doesn't own any experience yet.

✓ Yes, it has always been a good place for me to thrive and to develop my skills, especially since I don't have any experience yet.

'Is has' is incorrect; it should be 'it has'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' when general. 'Who doesn't own any experience' is awkward; 'I don't have any experience' is better. Suggestion: correct subject-verb agreement and word choice. (Lỗi sai về sự hòa hợp chủ ngữ-động từ và lựa chọn từ)

× But I would say I'm still learning to find, you know to thrive everyday and find another work that out.

✓ But I would say I'm still learning how to thrive every day and find other work opportunities.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Find another work that out' is incorrect. Suggestion: rephrase for clarity and correct word usage. (Lỗi cấu trúc câu và lựa chọn từ)

× I actually love it so far.

✓ I actually love it so far.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed. (Không có lỗi)

× It offers me a good salary, a good experience with my students and also, you know, some kind of soft skill and some hard skill where I have to manage my own salary.

✓ It offers me a good salary, good experience with my students, and also some soft skills and hard skills where I have to manage my own salary.

'Some kind of soft skill' should be plural 'soft skills' to match 'hard skills'. Also, 'a good experience' can be 'good experience' without article. Suggestion: correct quantifiers and plural forms. (Lỗi sử dụng lượng từ và số nhiều)

× I have to prepare the lessons before any works.

✓ I have to prepare the lessons before any work.

'Works' is incorrect here; 'work' is uncountable in this context. Suggestion: use 'work' without 's'. (Lỗi sử dụng giới từ và danh từ không đếm được)

× Up. I plan to. Do the same thing for the future, but also find another place who offer who can offer me a higher salary.

✓ I plan to do the same thing in the future, but also find another place that can offer me a higher salary.

The sentence is fragmented and has repeated words. 'Who' should be 'that' for places. Suggestion: combine fragments and correct relative pronoun. (Lỗi cấu trúc câu và đại từ quan hệ)

× Ann are rewarding salary would be would be of tremendous benefit for me.

✓ A rewarding salary would be of tremendous benefit for me.

'Ann are' is incorrect; likely meant 'A'. Also, repeated 'would be' should be once. Suggestion: correct article and remove repetition. (Lỗi sử dụng lượng từ và lỗi lặp từ)