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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

Yes, I'm literally students living in Malaysia. They study at a primary school here.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

I didn't have right now because I'm a students, but I'm study in a city names Kuala Lumpur. In Malaysia.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

I think, yeah, there's a good place to work, but I didn't have job right now, so I don't know there's a good place to work. But I know there have many food, many delicious food at there. In many traveler go to Derek to Trevor.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like the place because there is a office block an at the ground floor. There have variety of delicious food and many shops around the office park, so I like to place.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

I'm a teenager is now, but I have a plans for my future work. My future works. I want to be a doctor because Doctor Who's my dreams. I want to save many people that need help. So yeah, just this.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且语法错误较多。应直接回答自己是学生还是工作者,并避免使用复数形式错误。

Ví dụ: I am a student currently living in Malaysia, and I study at a primary school here.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,且未直接回答工作地点。应直接说明自己目前没有工作,并简洁说明学习地点。

Ví dụ: I don't have a job right now because I am a student, but I study in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且信息混乱。应直接表达对工作地点的看法,并用连词连接观点,避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: I think Kuala Lumpur is a good place to work because it offers many job opportunities and has a vibrant food scene that attracts many travelers.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为具体,但语法和表达不够准确。应注意冠词使用和句子结构,使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like the place because there is an office block with a variety of delicious food and many shops on the ground floor.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了未来计划,但语法和用词不准确。应简洁明了地表达职业目标,并说明原因。

Ví dụ: I am a teenager now, and my future plan is to become a doctor because it is my dream to help and save people in need.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I'm literally students living in Malaysia.

Yes, I'm literally a student living in Malaysia.

这里'students'是复数形式,但主语是单数的'I am',应使用单数形式'student'。主谓一致要求单复数一致。

Singular and plural issue

× They study at a primary school here.

I study at a primary school here.

前一句中主语是'I',这里用'they'指代不明确且不一致,应改为'I'。

Singular and plural issue

× I didn't have right now because I'm a students, but I'm study in a city names Kuala Lumpur.

I don't have a job right now because I'm a student, but I'm studying in a city named Kuala Lumpur.

'students'应为单数'student','didn't have'时态不合适,应用现在时'don't have','study'应用现在进行时'studying','names'应为过去分词'named'修饰city。

Present tense issue

× I didn't have right now because I'm a students, but I'm study in a city names Kuala Lumpur.

I don't have a job right now because I'm a student, but I'm studying in a city named Kuala Lumpur.

描述现在情况时,不能用过去时'didn't have',应使用现在时'don't have'。

Singular and plural issue

× I think, yeah, there's a good place to work, but I didn't have job right now, so I don't know there's a good place to work.

I think, yeah, it's a good place to work, but I don't have a job right now, so I don't know if it's a good place to work.

'there's a good place'应改为'it's a good place'更自然,'didn't have job'缺少冠词且时态错误,应为'don't have a job'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× But I know there have many food, many delicious food at there.

But I know there is a lot of delicious food there.

'there have'主谓不一致,应为'there is','many food'不可数名词food用量词'a lot of','at there'错误,正确用法是'there'。

Singular and plural issue

× In many traveler go to Derek to Trevor.

Many travelers go to Derek to travel.

'traveler'应为复数'travelers','to Trevor'应为'to travel',动词形式错误。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I like the place because there is a office block an at the ground floor.

Yes, I like the place because there is an office block on the ground floor.

'a office'前应使用'an'因为office以元音音素开头,'at the ground floor'应为'on the ground floor',介词错误。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× There have variety of delicious food and many shops around the office park, so I like to place.

There is a variety of delicious food and many shops around the office park, so I like the place.

'There have'主谓不一致,应为'There is','like to place'应为'like the place',冠词错误。

Singular and plural issue

× I'm a teenager is now, but I have a plans for my future work.

I'm a teenager now, but I have plans for my future work.

'a plans'中'plans'为复数,前面不应加不定冠词'a'。

Singular and plural issue

× My future works.

My future work.

'works'在此处应为不可数名词'work',表示职业或工作。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I want to be a doctor because Doctor Who's my dreams.

I want to be a doctor because being a doctor is my dream.

'Doctor Who's my dreams'表达不清,且'dreams'应为单数,改为'being a doctor is my dream'更准确。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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