Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct verb tenses and prepositions. For example, instead of 'I started working as a project in Union for an ultra pure water construction facillity,' say 'I started working as a project engineer at Union, a company specializing in ultra-pure water construction facilities.'

Ví dụ: I was a student until two and a half years ago. Then, I started working as a project engineer at Union, a company specializing in ultra-pure water construction facilities. Recently, two months ago, I transferred to the design department within the same field, focusing on water treatment.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives good information but could be clearer and more structured. Avoid run-on sentences and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct minor errors like 'Heating' which might be 'Hitting' or 'Irving' if you meant a city. Be specific about your company's services.

Ví dụ: Currently, I work at CVS Engineering Group, a branch located in Dallas, while our main office is in Houston. Our company specializes in providing solutions for existing water treatment facilities and developing new treatment methods for our clients.

Gợi ý: Your answer is positive and detailed but could be more concise and better organized. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'beautiful an all the colleagues' and instead describe the work environment or colleagues more clearly.

Ví dụ: I have been with the company for only three months, so it's hard to fully judge. However, I have experienced a positive work culture, supportive colleagues, and a talented, flexible manager. Therefore, I believe it is a good place to work.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains many repetitions and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary mistakes, and be specific about what you like about your workplace.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like my workplace. My workstation is on the third floor of the office building, equipped with multiple monitors which help me multitask efficiently. Additionally, I have access to amenities like a microwave and fridge, and the view from my window is very pleasant.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows clear goals but is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your plans more clearly and concisely, using linking words to connect ideas. Also, correct word choice errors like 'carrier' which should be 'career' and 'feature' which should be 'future.'

Ví dụ: My future plan is to pass the professional engineering exam to become a licensed engineer. This will allow me to sign off on engineering designs and calculations, and also to supervise junior engineers, helping them develop their careers.

× I was a student 2 1/2 years ago and then I started working as a project in Union for an ultra pure water construction facillity.

✓ I was a student 2 1/2 years ago and then I started working as a project in Union for an ultra pure water construction facility.

The word 'facillity' is a spelling error; the correct spelling is 'facility'. This is important for clarity and professionalism in communication.

× An then like most recently two months ago I changed my job and I moved to the design sector of the same field which is water treatment.

✓ And then, most recently two months ago, I changed my job and moved to the design sector of the same field, which is water treatment.

The word 'An' is a typo and should be 'And'. Also, commas are needed to separate introductory phrases and clauses for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× At present I am working at the CVS Engineering Group which is located in Heating in Dallas which is a branch and we have our main office in Houston.

✓ At present, I am working at the CVS Engineering Group, which is located in Irving, Dallas; it is a branch, and we have our main office in Houston.

The word 'Heating' seems to be a typo or incorrect place name; likely 'Irving' or another city is intended. Also, commas and semicolons improve sentence clarity. Proper nouns should be accurate for clear communication.

× Our main goal is to provide clients solution to the existing water treatment faclities and also building new methods.

✓ Our main goal is to provide clients with solutions to the existing water treatment facilities and also to build new methods.

The phrase 'provide clients solution' is incorrect; it should be 'provide clients with solutions'. Also, 'faclities' is a misspelling of 'facilities'. The verb 'building' should be in the infinitive form 'to build' to parallel 'to provide'. This improves grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I have just started with the company for three months now and it's difficult to judge a company and in this short period.

✓ I have just started with the company three months ago, and it's difficult to judge a company in such a short period.

The phrase 'have just started for three months now' is awkward; 'started three months ago' is more appropriate. Also, 'and in this short period' is incomplete and should be 'in such a short period' to complete the thought.

× But so far I have seen this company work culture, beautiful an all the colleagues and my manager or super talented and super flexible and I feel proud to be a part of the team.

✓ But so far, I have seen that this company's work culture is beautiful, and all the colleagues and my manager are super talented and super flexible, and I feel proud to be a part of the team.

The sentence lacks proper linking verbs and has incorrect conjunctions. 'Beautiful an all the colleagues' is incorrect; it should be 'beautiful, and all the colleagues'. Also, 'or' should be 'are'. Proper sentence structure and conjunction use improve clarity.

× I do like the place a lot more work.

✓ I do like the place a lot more at work.

The phrase 'a lot more work' is unclear; adding 'at' clarifies that the liking is about the place at work.

× My work station is on the third floor of their commercial or office office office, office building an I have couple monitors to work on multiple things and then the view through my window is super Ann.

✓ My workstation is on the third floor of their commercial office building, and I have a couple of monitors to work on multiple things. The view through my window is super nice.

Repeated words 'office' are errors and should be removed. 'Work station' is better as 'workstation'. 'Couple monitors' needs the article 'a' and 'of' to be correct. 'Super Ann' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'super nice' fits better. Proper article use and word choice improve clarity.

× I have also access to all of them and it is like microwave, fridge and everything so I feel it's so good.

✓ I also have access to all of them, like a microwave, fridge, and everything, so I feel it's very good.

The phrase 'I have also access' is incorrect; 'I also have access' is correct. 'It is like microwave' lacks articles; it should be 'like a microwave'. Proper pronoun and article use improve sentence correctness.

× My future work plan is to get my professional engineering exam then so that I can be a licensed professional engineer and I can build my carrier more focused where I would be able to be at be able to sign engineering designs and calculations, and I would also be able to supervise young engineers and so that they can shine in their feature as well.

✓ My future work plan is to pass my professional engineering exam so that I can become a licensed professional engineer and build my career more focused, where I will be able to sign engineering designs and calculations. I will also be able to supervise young engineers so that they can shine in their future as well.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'get my professional engineering exam' should be 'pass my professional engineering exam'. 'Carrier' is a misspelling of 'career'. 'Would be able to be at be able to' is redundant and incorrect; 'will be able to' is correct for future plans. 'Feature' should be 'future'. Correct future tense and word choice improve clarity and correctness.