Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is enthusiastic but needs to be more structured and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to keep your answer within 5 sentences and use appropriate vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy parties. For example, recently I attended my brother's birthday party where I invited my close friends. Moreover, my mother prepared various delicious dishes, which made the event more enjoyable. Overall, I love parties because they bring family and friends together.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and provide specific details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, we had parties quite often, especially during birthdays and family gatherings. For instance, my father recently organized a grand celebration, which was very memorable. So, parties were a regular part of my childhood.

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but needs better sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be concise. Also, avoid repetition and ensure clarity in your response.

Exemplo: Yes, I have organized a party for my younger brother's birthday. He was very surprised and happy because I invited his friends and helped my mother prepare various dishes. It was a joyful experience for all of us.

× Recently there was my brother's birthday party and I was I invited my close friends as well.

✓ Recently there was my brother's birthday party and I invited my close friends as well.

The phrase 'I was I invited' is incorrect because 'was' is unnecessary here. The correct past tense verb 'invited' should be used alone to indicate the action in the past.

× I love enjoying party whereas my mother always make different cuisines in party.

✓ I love enjoying parties whereas my mother always makes different cuisines at parties.

The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'my mother'; it should be 'makes'. Also, 'party' should be plural 'parties' to match the context, and the preposition 'in' should be 'at' for events.

× Party did not occur but uh recently a party organized by my father on a grand celebration.

✓ Parties did not occur often but recently a party was organized by my father for a grand celebration.

The sentence lacks proper past tense structure and subject-verb agreement. 'Party did not occur' should be 'Parties did not occur often' for clarity, and 'a party organized' needs the auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past passive voice.

× Yes, absolutely I have ever organized a party of my younger brother birthday as he was surprised and feel elated when I organized party for him as invited his friends and help my mother in various dishes on the part.

✓ Yes, absolutely I have organized a party for my younger brother's birthday as he was surprised and felt elated when I organized the party for him, invited his friends, and helped my mother with various dishes at the party.

The phrase 'have ever organized' is incorrect; 'have organized' is appropriate. 'Feel' should be past tense 'felt' to match 'was surprised'. 'As invited' should be 'and invited', and 'help' should be past tense 'helped'. Also, 'on the part' should be 'at the party'.