Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct vocabulary and avoid repetition. For example, use 'parties' instead of 'parts' and avoid repeating 'parties' unnecessarily. Also, make your answer more natural by explaining your feelings briefly and clearly.

Exemplo: Actually, I don't enjoy parties much nowadays, but I sometimes attend special occasions like weddings of my close friends or relatives.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and provide clearer, more specific details. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'Fast and fast'. Try to link your ideas logically and explain the occasions more clearly.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I often attended parties at nursery or art school, such as celebrations for Children's Day and Mother's Day.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and correct sentence structure. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Explain your feelings and the event in a simple, natural way using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, last year I organized a birthday party for my sister, which showed how much I love her and wanted to make her feel special.

× Actually I don't like parts anymore but sometimes I have to attend some occasions like wedding parties of my alternative or close friends or parties.

✓ Actually I don't like parties anymore but sometimes I have to attend some occasions like wedding parties of my close or alternative friends.

The word 'parts' is incorrect; it should be 'parties' to match the context of social events. Also, 'alternative friends' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'close or alternative friends' is better phrased as 'close or alternative friends' or simply 'close friends'. The plural form 'parties' is needed here to refer to multiple events.

× When I was a kid, I have parties in nursery or art school, like childhood, childhood Day, Mother's Day. Fast and fast.

✓ When I was a kid, I had parties in nursery or art school, like Childhood Day and Mother's Day. Very often.

The verb 'have' should be in the past tense 'had' to agree with the past time frame 'When I was a kid'. Also, 'childhood' is not a holiday; it should be 'Childhood Day'. The phrase 'Fast and fast' is unclear and should be replaced with 'Very often' to express frequency.

× Yes, in one day in the last year, I organized the birthday party for my sister, which that reflected the how how that reflects my feelings of love for her. And I really organize this, OK.

✓ Yes, one day last year, I organized a birthday party for my sister, which reflected my feelings of love for her. And I really enjoyed organizing it.

The phrase 'in one day in the last year' is better as 'one day last year'. 'The birthday party' can be 'a birthday party' unless a specific party was previously mentioned. The clause 'which that reflected the how how that reflects' is grammatically incorrect and redundant; it should be simplified to 'which reflected my feelings of love for her'. The sentence 'I really organize this' is incorrect in tense and meaning; it should be 'I really enjoyed organizing it' to express past enjoyment.