Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，避免重复词汇，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: It depends on my situation. If I have been working or studying hard, I prefer to relax alone and avoid parties. However, when I miss my friends, I like to join parties to keep in touch with them.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，并且用连接词使内容更连贯。

Exemplo: When I was a kid, my friends and I celebrated holiday parties every week. Since we had to study on weekdays, we usually played and had fun together on weekends.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不清且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇和连接词。

Exemplo: Actually, I have never organized a party because I find it exhausting to be the leader. I prefer to help my friends and share the responsibilities instead of leading alone.

× If I'm worked out and do a lot of tasks like study or or work, I need to relax so I don't.

✓ If I've worked out and done a lot of tasks like studying or working, I need to relax so I don't.

这里涉及过去完成时态的使用。'I'm worked out' 是错误的，应该用现在完成时 'I've worked out'。另外，'do a lot of tasks like study or or work' 中的动词形式不正确，应该用动名词形式 'studying' 和 'working'。建议使用现在完成时和动名词形式来表达已经完成的动作。

× If I'm worked out and do a lot of tasks like study or or work, I need to relax so I don't.

✓ If I've worked out and done a lot of tasks like studying or working, I need to relax so I don't.

句中 'do' 应该与前面的动作保持时态一致，使用过去分词 'done' 更合适，表示已经完成的动作。

× But if I miss my friends I wanted to join parties with them to keep connection.

✓ But if I miss my friends, I want to join parties with them to keep the connection.

这里 'wanted' 用错了时态，应该用一般现在时 'want'，因为前面是条件句的现在时态。

× when I with my girlfriends, we celebrated the holiday party every week.

✓ when I was with my girlfriends, we celebrated the holiday party every week.

缺少动词 'was'，导致句子结构错误。

× so we play together at on weekends.

✓ so we play together on weekends.

介词 'at' 和 'on' 不能同时使用，正确用法是 'on weekends'。

× Actually no because I don't want to be a leader to hold the party because I feel it's so exhausted and tired.

✓ Actually no, because I don't want to be the leader to hold the party because I feel it's so exhausting and tiring.

'exhausted' 和 'tired' 是形容词，描述人的状态；这里应使用现在分词 'exhausting' 和 'tiring' 来描述使人感到疲惫的事物。

× I prefer to just communicate with friend and make the deer and then wait together to organize this party.

✓ I prefer to just communicate with friends and make the plan and then wait together to organize this party.

'friend' 应为复数 'friends'，'deer' 应为 'plan'，原句中词汇错误导致意思不明。

× Don't suggest lead by one special person.

✓ I don't suggest being led by one special person.

句子缺少主语和正确的动词形式，且 'lead' 应改为被动形式 'being led'，以表达被领导的意思。