Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'addicted to enjoy' và 'party have'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy parties, especially when all my friends are there and the party is held at night. I find these gatherings very exciting and a great way to relax.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'When have a birthday'. Ngoài ra, nên trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về tần suất và các dịp tổ chức tiệc.

Exemplo: I didn't have parties very often as a child, but usually about once a month. I especially enjoyed celebrating birthdays of my friends, my brothers, and myself.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và động từ trợ giúp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi như 'I haven't do before'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp thêm chi tiết về kế hoạch tổ chức tiệc trong tương lai.

Exemplo: I have never organized a party before because my mom usually does it for me. However, I hope to organize one myself in the next year or two, perhaps to celebrate a special occasion or give a presentation.

× I am addicted to enjoy parties, especially when the party have all of my friends and is in the night.

✓ I am addicted to enjoying parties, especially when the party has all of my friends and is at night.

The phrase 'addicted to' should be followed by a verb in the -ing form, so 'enjoy' should be 'enjoying'. Also, 'the party have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'party' is singular, so it should be 'has'. Additionally, 'is in the night' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'is at night'.

× especially when the party have all of my friends and is in the night.

✓ especially when the party has all of my friends and is at night.

The subject 'party' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, the preposition 'in the night' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at night'.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The plural form 'parties' is more appropriate here because the question refers to multiple occasions. Using singular 'a party' is less natural in this context.

× Not really often, but I would say that it's on a monthly basis.

✓ Not very often, but I would say that it's on a monthly basis.

The phrase 'not really often' is awkward; 'not very often' is the correct and natural expression.

× When it comes a kid, I just enjoy the party.

✓ When I was a kid, I just enjoyed parties.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The phrase 'When it comes a kid' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'When I was a kid'. Also, 'enjoy the party' should be plural 'enjoyed parties' to match the context.

× When have a birthday of anyone else like my friends, my brothers and even mine.

✓ When anyone else like my friends, my brothers, or even I have a birthday.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and preposition usage. The phrase 'When have a birthday of anyone else' is incorrect; it should be 'When anyone else has a birthday'. Also, 'mine' is incorrect here; the subject pronoun 'I' is appropriate.

× I haven't do before.

✓ I haven't done it before.

After 'haven't' (have not), the past participle form of the verb should be used. 'Do' is base form; the correct past participle is 'done'.

× My mom usually do this for me and I think that in the future, just about one or two years later, I could organize a party for me to make a presentation.

✓ My mom usually does this for me, and I think that in the future, just about one or two years later, I could organize a party to make a presentation.

The subject 'My mom' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'does' instead of 'do'. Also, 'for me to make a presentation' is better expressed as 'to make a presentation'.