Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Apni answer e kichu sentence structure ar linking words use koren, jate answer ta natural ar fluent lage. Apni 'because' bar bar use korchen, eta avoid koren. Apnar feelings ar karon gulo clear ar specific bhabe bolen. For example, apni bolte paren, 'I usually don't enjoy parties because I find it hard to dance and talk in noisy environments.'

Exemplo: I usually don't enjoy parties because I find it hard to dance and talk in noisy environments. Moreover, I am a quiet person, so socializing in such places makes me uncomfortable.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni answer ta beshi clear ar coherent korte linking words use korte paren. Apni specific details dite paren, jemon kon type er parties chhilo na, ar apnar daily routine kemon chhilo. Example hisebe, 'I rarely attended parties as a child because I lived in a small village where such events were uncommon.'

Exemplo: I rarely attended parties as a child because I lived in a small village where such events were uncommon. Usually, after school, I played outside and spent my evenings reading books.

Sugestão: Apni answer e kichu grammar ar sentence structure improve korte paren. Apni linking words use kore answer ta aro fluent korte paren. Apni specific bhabe apnar role ar experience bolte paren. For example, 'Although I didn't organize parties as a child, at university I helped organize departmental parties and took an active role in planning.'

Exemplo: Although I didn't organize parties as a child, at university I helped organize departmental parties and took an active role in planning and coordinating the events.

× Usually I don't like parties because it feels it makes me bored because I cannot dance or I cannot.

✓ Usually I don't like parties because they make me bored since I cannot dance or do other activities.

The phrase 'it feels it makes me bored' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'make' should be used directly with the object 'me' and the adjective 'bored'. Also, 'because I cannot' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what the speaker cannot do. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence structure.

× I am not a very talkative person, so it is very difficult for me to communicate with the people in the very noisy place.

✓ I am not a very talkative person, so it is very difficult for me to communicate with people in a very noisy place.

The phrase 'the people' and 'the very noisy place' are incorrect here because the speaker is referring to people and places in general, not specific ones. The definite article 'the' should be omitted or replaced with 'a' to indicate any noisy place.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The question uses 'a party' in singular, but generally, people have multiple parties during childhood. Using plural 'parties' is more natural and appropriate here.

× There was not a lot of parties over there.

✓ There were not a lot of parties over there.

The subject 'parties' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× We just had, we just came from office school and have some playing in the afternoon and then in the evening we tried to read and used to read.

✓ We just came from school and played in the afternoon, and then in the evening we tried to read and used to read.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. 'Office school' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness, using past tense verbs consistently.

× So it's there is no.

✓ So there were none.

The phrase 'it's there is no' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correct form is 'there were none' to indicate the absence of parties in the past.

× No, I during my childhood, I didn't have any chance to organize any party.

✓ No, during my childhood, I didn't have any chance to organize a party.

The sentence has awkward word order and article usage. 'Any party' should be 'a party' because it refers to a single event. The phrase 'I during my childhood' is reordered for natural English syntax.

× But when I was in university, we always organized the departmental party and I was in the organization, I was one of the organizer and I played a very good role.

✓ But when I was at university, we always organized departmental parties, and I was part of the organization; I was one of the organizers and played a very important role.

The sentence has tense consistency issues and article misuse. 'In university' is better as 'at university'. 'The departmental party' should be plural 'departmental parties' if recurring. 'One of the organizer' should be 'one of the organizers'. The phrase 'played a very good role' is improved to 'played a very important role' for natural expression.