Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'interventive' không phù hợp, câu 'if my pen if is my best friend party I will' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: I don't like parties because I am an introverted person. However, if my best friend is hosting a party, I would consider going.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I'm just celebrated my party when my birthday'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Exemplo: I had a party once a year, usually on my birthday. I really enjoyed celebrating with my family during that special time.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp ('supremum party' không đúng). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

Exemplo: No, I have never organized a party because my parents usually organize parties for me.

× I don't like parties, definitely not because I'm an interventive person so I'm not a big fan of parties.

✓ I don't like parties, definitely not because I'm an introverted person, so I'm not a big fan of parties.

The word 'interventive' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'introverted'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to properly connect the clauses.

× However if my pen if is my best friend party I will.

✓ However, if my pen is my best friend, I will go to the party.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. 'Pen if' seems to be a typo for 'pen is' or 'person is'. The sentence needs commas to separate clauses and a verb to complete the thought.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The question is correct, but the student's answer should match plural 'parties' since it refers to multiple events.

× Well, once a year, because I just. I'm just celebrated my party when my birthday and it once a year so I really love it and enjoy that time with my family.

✓ Well, once a year, because I only celebrate my birthday party once a year, so I really love it and enjoy that time with my family.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect verb forms. 'I'm just celebrated' should be 'I only celebrate'. The sentence needs to be combined properly for clarity.

× Have you ever organized a party?

✓ Have you ever organized a party?

The question is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× Hmm let me think. Umm no, because all the time after my parents supremum party for me and I didn't do it anyway.

✓ Hmm, let me think. Umm, no, because my parents always organize parties for me, and I haven't done it myself anyway.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word usage ('supremum'). The corrected sentence clarifies meaning and uses proper tense and structure.