Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I like parties because they are a great way to enjoy and relax with friends and family. I especially prefer day parties since they allow me to spend more quality time with my family."

Exemplo: Yes, I like parties because they are a great way to enjoy and relax with friends and family. I especially prefer day parties since they allow me to spend more quality time with my family.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks coherence and contains some grammatical errors. Try to organise your answer with clear linking words and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, avoid using "recently" when talking about childhood events. For example, you can say, "When I was a kid, I often attended parties with my parents, such as weddings, retirement celebrations, and friends' birthdays. For instance, in 7th grade, I went to a wedding in Chandigarh, which I really enjoyed."

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I often attended parties with my parents, such as weddings, retirement celebrations, and friends' birthdays. For instance, in 7th grade, I went to a wedding in Chandigarh, which I really enjoyed.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tense and more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, you can say, "Yes, last year I organised my parents' wedding anniversary party. It was a lot of fun, and I spent three days preparing for it. We celebrated joyfully on that day."

Exemplo: Yes, last year I organised my parents' wedding anniversary party. It was a lot of fun, and I spent three days preparing for it. We celebrated joyfully on that day.

× Yes, I like parties because in parties one can enjoy and have fun with his friends or people also remove stress and relax their mind in parties and unlike other parties, I like day parties as in day parties we enjoy more with family.

✓ Yes, I like parties because at parties one can enjoy and have fun with their friends or people can also remove stress and relax their minds at parties. Unlike other parties, I like day parties as at day parties we enjoy more with family.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'his' as a generic pronoun; 'their' is more appropriate for gender neutrality. Also, 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with plural subject 'people'. Additionally, prepositions 'in parties' should be 'at parties' for correct usage.

× Yes, I like parties because in parties one can enjoy and have fun with his friends or people also remove stress and relax their mind in parties and unlike other parties, I like day parties as in day parties we enjoy more with family.

✓ Yes, I like parties because at parties one can enjoy and have fun with their friends or people can also remove stress and relax their minds at parties. Unlike other parties, I like day parties as at day parties we enjoy more with family.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'parties'; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to events or gatherings.

× Yes, I like parties because in parties one can enjoy and have fun with his friends or people also remove stress and relax their mind in parties and unlike other parties, I like day parties as in day parties we enjoy more with family.

✓ Yes, I like parties because at parties one can enjoy and have fun with their friends or people can also remove stress and relax their minds at parties. Unlike other parties, I like day parties as at day parties we enjoy more with family.

The word 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with the plural subject 'people'.

× When I was a kid, I usually went to some parties with my parents only such as marriage parties, retirement parties and birthday parties of my friends with my parent.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually went to some parties with my parents only, such as marriage parties, retirement parties, and birthday parties of my friends with my parents.

The word 'parent' should be plural 'parents' to agree with 'my' and the context of attending parties with both parents.

× Recently, when I was a kid in 7th standard, I went to a marriage party in Chandigarh.

✓ When I was a kid in 7th standard, I went to a marriage party in Chandigarh.

The word 'Recently' is inappropriate here because the event happened in the past during childhood, not recently.

× Yes, last year I organized my mother and father marriage anniversary party, which was a fun for me and I prepared for three days for that party and we celebrate a lot on that day.

✓ Yes, last year I organized my mother and father's marriage anniversary party, which was fun for me. I prepared for three days for that party and we celebrated a lot on that day.

The phrase 'a fun' is incorrect; 'fun' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'celebrate' should be in past tense 'celebrated' to match the past event.

× Yes, last year I organized my mother and father marriage anniversary party, which was a fun for me and I prepared for three days for that party and we celebrate a lot on that day.

✓ Yes, last year I organized my mother and father's marriage anniversary party, which was fun for me. I prepared for three days for that party and we celebrated a lot on that day.

The phrase 'my mother and father marriage anniversary party' lacks possessive apostrophes; it should be 'my mother and father's' to show possession.