App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Work on grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles), reduce fillers (uh, like), and make sentences more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, and also).

Exemplo: I have recently used social media apps, mainly Instagram and Facebook. I use Instagram for entertainment and to follow current news, and I use WhatsApp almost daily to keep in touch with friends.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and word choice (e.g., 'apps I am usually interested in are AI apps'). Remove hesitations and be specific about functions. Use linking words to connect reasons (for example, because, and).

Exemplo: I am usually interested in AI apps because they provide information and emotional support. For example, I use ChatGPT almost every day to ask for emotional advice, basic healthcare information, and help with study questions.

Sugestão: Practice correct prepositions and plural/singular forms, and complete sentences. Use clearer linking words (for example, also, besides) and give one specific example succinctly.

Exemplo: I usually discover apps through advertisements on Facebook and Instagram. For example, I recently learned about the Deep6 app on Instagram, and I also get recommendations from friends who suggest apps they find convenient.

Sugestão: Be precise and avoid repetition. Use correct verb forms and clear phrasing (e.g., 'apps that allow me to record food intake and estimate calories'). Mention one or two specific features and link them with purpose words (so that, in order to).

Exemplo: In the future I would like to use fitness apps that let me record my food intake and estimate calories. For example, an app with a barcode scanner and photo-based calorie estimates would help me control my nutrition and stay within my calorie goals.

× The apps that have recently used is the social media apps like for example, the Instagram, the Facebook.

✓ The apps that I have recently used are social media apps, for example Instagram and Facebook.

Missing subject 'I' and wrong verb agreement: 'apps' is plural so use 'are'. Also unnecessary definite articles before app names and awkward phrasing. Suggest adding 'I' after 'have' and use plural verb, remove 'the' before proper nouns, and simplify phrasing.

× And I also like to use the WhatsApp almost every day to keep a conversation with the others.

✓ I also use WhatsApp almost every day to keep in touch with others.

Incorrect preposition 'to keep a conversation with' and unnecessary article 'the' before 'others'. Use the idiomatic phrasal verb 'keep in touch with' and omit 'the'. Also 'the WhatsApp' should be 'WhatsApp'.

× And As for the Instagram and Facebook, I'd like to keep, uh, like the entertainment purpose and also the up to date news.

✓ As for Instagram and Facebook, I use them for entertainment and for up-to-date news.

Unclear conjunctions and repetition 'like' and misplaced commas. Use parallel structure 'for entertainment and for up-to-date news'. Remove unnecessary filler words and definite articles before platform names.

× So the app state I usually interested in is like the AI apps that will give me the info, a lot of information and also the emotional support.

✓ The type of apps I am usually interested in is AI apps that give me information and emotional support.

Awkward word order 'app state I usually interested in' and incorrect auxiliary missing 'am'. Use correct subject-verb order and present simple 'give' for habitual statements. Remove redundant phrases 'the info, a lot of information'.

× So for example, I use ChatGPT also almost every day too for asking the emotional advice and also some my personal umm, healthcare doctor and also some uh, question in the study.

✓ For example, I use ChatGPT almost every day to ask for emotional advice, personal healthcare guidance, and help with study questions.

Incorrect use of 'for asking' (use 'to ask' or 'ask for') and awkward noun phrases 'some my personal healthcare doctor'. Use 'ask for' with uncountable 'advice', and parallel noun phrases 'personal healthcare guidance' and 'study questions'. Remove fillers and redundant words.

× Well for me I usually find out the different apps to the advertisement in the Facebook or Instagram.

✓ Well, I usually discover different apps through advertisements on Facebook or Instagram.

Incorrect preposition 'to the advertisement in the Facebook' and wrong verb 'find out' for discovering apps. Use 'discover' or 'find' and preposition 'through' and 'on' for platforms. Remove article 'the' before Facebook/Instagram.

× So for example recently I also learned more about the deep 6 apps which is similar to ChatGPT from the Instagram.

✓ For example, recently I learned about the Deep6 app, which is similar to ChatGPT, from Instagram.

Plural 'apps' vs singular 'is' mismatch; proper noun 'Deep6' likely singular 'app'. Use commas for nonrestrictive clause and remove 'the' before Instagram. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'app' is singular so use 'is'.

× And other than that I also get a recommendations from the friends.

✓ Other than that, I also get recommendations from friends.

Incorrect article 'a' with plural 'recommendations' and unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'friends'. Use plural noun without 'a' and omit 'the' when speaking generally.

× They saying that the like recommending certain apps that is convenient and.

✓ They say that they are recommending certain apps that are convenient.

Missing auxiliary and incomplete sentence. Use present simple 'say' or 'are saying' and ensure subject 'they' for both clauses. Match plural 'apps' with plural verb 'are'. Complete the sentence.

× I think the kind of ad that I would like to use more in the future is the fitness app.

✓ I think the kind of app I would like to use more in the future is a fitness app.

Confusion between 'ad' and 'app' and incorrect use of definite article 'the' before 'fitness app' when speaking generally. Use 'a fitness app' for a nonspecific example and correct 'ad' to 'app'.

× So I would like to use the apps that can record, allow me to record every food intake in the calories and also they have a like a scans function so that I can know what is the estimated calorie for each meal.

✓ I would like to use apps that allow me to record every food item's calorie intake and that have a scan function so I can know the estimated calories for each meal.

Redundant and incorrect structure 'can record, allow me to record'. Use 'allow me to record' or 'let me record' plus clearer noun phrase 'food item's calorie intake'. Use 'scan function' not 'scans function' and ensure parallel clauses with 'that'.

× And I would like to control try to control my nutrition and also the calorie below.

✓ I would like to try to control my nutrition and keep my calorie intake low.

Redundant phrase 'control try to control' and awkward 'the calorie below'. Use 'try to control' and idiomatic 'keep my calorie intake low'. Ensure clarity and concise phrasing.