History— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I studied history in 12th grade and really enjoyed it. Besides school, I often watch educational videos on YouTube and social media to learn more about historical events.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi sai về thì và chia động từ, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I don't particularly like learning history, but I always focus on it at school and university. Additionally, I watch videos on social media platforms to help me understand the subject better.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Learning history helps me understand the cultures of other countries and learn about important events from the past. I enjoy history because it allows me to discover many interesting facts.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai về thì và cấu trúc câu. Hãy thêm các lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe learning history is important because it helps us understand the past and appreciate different cultures. It also teaches us valuable lessons that can guide our future decisions.

× Yes, I have studied history in 12th grade when I was a student.

✓ Yes, I studied history in 12th grade when I was a student.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present perfect tense 'have studied' with a specific past time 'in 12th grade'. The present perfect tense should not be used with definite past time expressions. The simple past tense 'studied' is appropriate here.

× I prefer to learn history from other videos on YouTube or social media app.

✓ I prefer to learn history through other videos on YouTube or social media apps.

The preposition 'from' is not appropriate when referring to learning via videos; 'through' better expresses the medium. Also, 'social media app' should be pluralized to 'social media apps' to indicate multiple platforms.

× I can't like learning history so I always focuses on subject on this subject in school or in university.

✓ I don't like learning history so I always focus on this subject in school or university.

The phrase 'can't like' is incorrect; 'don't like' is the correct negative form. Also, 'focuses' should be 'focus' to agree with the subject 'I'. The phrase 'on subject on this subject' is redundant; 'on this subject' suffices.

× Besides, I research some videos in social media platforms and watch it.

✓ Besides, I research some videos on social media platforms and watch them.

The correct preposition for platforms is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'watch it' is incorrect because 'videos' is plural; it should be 'watch them'.

× Learn his story make me understand other countries culture and I know about historical event which happened in the past.

✓ Learning history makes me understand other countries' cultures and I know about historical events which happened in the past.

'Learn his story' is incorrect; it should be 'Learning history'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'Learning history'. 'Other countries culture' should be plural possessive 'other countries' cultures'. 'Historical event' should be plural 'historical events'.

× I quite like history and I want to discover everything.

✓ I quite like history and I want to discover everything about it.

The sentence is grammatically correct but adding 'about it' clarifies what 'everything' refers to, improving clarity.

× Yes, I think learning history plays an important role in education.

✓ Yes, I think learning history plays an important role in education.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× First, researching about history makes me feel busy at present and discover other culture make me know about credit.

✓ First, researching history makes me feel busy at present and discovering other cultures helps me learn about different traditions.

The phrase 'researching about history' is incorrect; 'researching history' is correct. 'Discover other culture' should be 'discovering other cultures' to maintain parallel structure and plural form. 'Make me know about credit' is unclear and incorrect; it is replaced with 'helps me learn about different traditions' for clarity and correctness.