Colours— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the colours, then give one clear reason for each colour using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'and'). Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences and use more natural vocabulary (e.g. 'black' not 'blacks').

Exemplo: My favourite colours are black and dusty pink. I like black because many of the musicians I admire wear black and it represents the music scene I follow. I also like dusty pink because it suits my style and complements my outfits.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the disliked colour, then provide a single specific reason using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (use 'makes' for third-person singular).

Exemplo: I dislike light brown because it makes my skin look darker. For that reason, I usually avoid wearing clothes in that colour.

Sugestão: Answer directly about your friends, not just yourself, and use clearer structure: one topic sentence about what your friends prefer, then one reason with a linking word. Reduce repetition and correct phrasing (e.g. 'part of the black metal scene').

Exemplo: Most of my friends prefer black. This is because we are part of the black metal scene and wearing black is part of our group's identity when we go to concerts.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the colour, then explain one specific reason using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and correct grammar (e.g. 'makes' not 'make'). Keep it concise and logical.

Exemplo: Green makes me uncomfortable in my room, especially army green. I feel it makes my skin look darker, so I avoid surrounding myself with that colour.

× I have two favorite colors are blacks and dusty pink.

✓ My two favorite colors are black and dusty pink.

Incorrect use of plural form and sentence structure: 'I have two favorite colors are...' wrongly repeats subject and verb. Also 'blacks' should be 'black' when naming a color. Correct structure: 'My two favorite colors are ...' or 'I have two favorite colors: black and dusty pink.' Use singular color words when naming colors.

× I think it two colors according to the first musicians that all the musicians I like relate to the black and for a second for the the stepping is according to my color style of my body.

✓ I think these two colors are connected to the musicians I like: most are associated with black, and the other, dusty pink, matches my personal style.

Sentence has multiple structure issues and unclear references. 'I think it two colors' is ungrammatical; use 'these two colors' or 'these colors'. 'according to the first musicians' and 'for a second for the the stepping' are unclear; rephrase to show intended meaning: that many musicians wear black and dusty pink fits the student's style. Keep clauses concise and use clear subject-referent relationships.

× I don't like like brown because when I wear the clothes that relate to the light brown it make my skin darker and I avoid all the clothes that relate to the light brown color.

✓ I don't like brown because when I wear light brown clothes they make my skin look darker, so I avoid them.

Pronoun and verb agreement problems: 'it make' should be 'they make' because 'clothes' is plural. Repetition 'like like' is redundant. 'The clothes that relate to the light brown' is awkward; use 'light brown clothes' and replace repeated phrase with a pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition.

× My friendly color is black because I'm under the black metal scenes.

✓ My favorite color is black because I'm part of the black metal scene.

'Friendly color' is incorrect adjective choice; 'favorite color' fits context. 'I'm under the black metal scenes' is incorrect preposition and pluralization; use 'part of' and singular 'scene'. This clarifies meaning and corrects adjective usage.

× I think that I have to go to the concert with the black clothes and I think it's it make it the identity of our community.

✓ I think I should go to concerts wearing black clothes because it helps create the identity of our community.

Verb form and extra words: 'have to go to the concert with the black clothes' is awkward; use 'go to concerts wearing black clothes'. 'it's it make it' contains redundant pronouns and wrong verb form; use 'it helps create' or 'it makes' to express effect. Also pluralize 'concerts' for general statement.

× I don't like green, specially all the kind of green like uh, army or like green because I think it make my skin darker and it's too, it's too attractive when I think I wear that color.

✓ I don't like green, especially shades like army green, because I think they make my skin look darker and are too striking when I wear them.

Use 'especially' instead of 'specially'. 'All the kind of green' should be 'shades like army green'. Pronoun and verb agreement: 'it make' should be 'they make' to agree with 'shades' or 'them'. 'It's too attractive when I think I wear that color' is unclear—use 'are too striking when I wear them'. This corrects adverb choice, agreement, and clarity.