Stories— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer wa natural dewa arimasen. Eigo no tsukaikata ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, jisho teki na tango o tsukatte, bunshou o rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai. Mata, 5 bunshou ijou ni shinai you ni shite kudasai.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child. My mother and grandmother often told me ghost stories. Although they were a bit scary, I enjoyed listening to them very much.

Sugestão: Kotae no bunpou to tango no shiyou ni chuumoku shite kudasai. Eigo no bunshou ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga tsutawari nikui desu. Rikai shi yasui you ni, bunshou o shoujiki ni, shoujiki ni setsumei shite kudasai.

Exemplo: I prefer listening to stories rather than reading them because since childhood, my grandmother used to tell me many ghost stories. They were scary but also very exciting.

Sugestão: Kotae wa rikai shi yasui desu ga, bunshou no seikaku sa to renraku-sei o takameru tame ni, setsumei o motto shousai ni shite kudasai. Mata, fukuzatsu na tango yori mo, shizen de jouzu na tango o tsukatte kudasai.

Exemplo: No, I did not write any stories when I was a child because writing was not my favorite activity. Instead, I preferred painting. I found writing stories quite difficult.

Sugestão: Kotae ga fukanzen de, imi ga tsutawari nikui desu. Kotae o kanzen ni shite, bunshou o rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai. Motto seikaku na tango o tsukatte, setsumei o fukameru you ni shite kudasai.

Exemplo: I like fantasy stories because they allow me to imagine new worlds. I also enjoy thrilling stories, such as ghost tales or science fiction, because they are exciting and interesting.

× Yeah, I loved stories when I was signed or my kind mother and maternal grandmother used to till a lot of story related to the ghost.

✓ Yeah, I loved stories when I was young, and my kind mother and maternal grandmother used to tell a lot of stories related to ghosts.

The word 'signed' is incorrect and should be 'young' to indicate childhood. 'Till' is a misspelling of 'tell'. 'Story' should be plural 'stories' to match 'a lot of'. 'The ghost' should be 'ghosts' to generalize and match plural form.

× Uh, it was quite fearful, but I enjoyed the she loved it.

✓ Uh, it was quite fearful, but I enjoyed it; she loved it.

The phrase 'I enjoyed the she loved it' is incorrect. It should be separated into two clauses: 'I enjoyed it' and 'she loved it'. The word 'fearful' is better replaced with 'scary' but since it's not in the list, it is left as is.

× Well, I prefer listen to these stories to reading them because I have top of such habit since my childhood is my grandmother used to tell me a lot of story related to ghost which were very scary but at the time exca exciting.

✓ Well, I prefer listening to these stories to reading them because I have had such a habit since my childhood; my grandmother used to tell me a lot of stories related to ghosts which were very scary but at the time exciting.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the '-ing' form: 'listening' instead of 'listen'. 'Top of such habit' is incorrect; it should be 'had such a habit'. 'Story' should be plural 'stories'. 'Ghost' should be plural 'ghosts'. 'Exca exciting' seems to be a typo and corrected to 'exciting'.

× No, I did not write any study when I was a child.

✓ No, I did not write any story when I was a child.

'Study' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'story' as the question is about writing stories.

× Uh, writing story was not a cup of my tea.

✓ Uh, writing stories was not a cup of my tea.

'Story' should be plural 'stories' to generalize the activity. 'Writing stories' is a gerund phrase acting as the subject.

× I usually used to read or listen to stories.

✓ I usually used to read or listen to stories.

This sentence is correct in past tense and usage; no correction needed.

× What I like to do painting rather than writing stories.

✓ What I like to do is painting rather than writing stories.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to connect the subject and complement. The correct structure is 'What I like to do is painting...'.

× I find it quite difficult to write a story.

✓ I find it quite difficult to write a story.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I like the story about the law of fantasies Uh, at the same time I like story related to some thrill with might be about the cost or any sci-fi stories The last time I.

✓ I like stories about the world of fantasies. Uh, at the same time, I like stories related to some thrill which might be about ghosts or any sci-fi stories.

'Story' should be plural 'stories' to generalize. 'Law of fantasies' seems incorrect and is corrected to 'world of fantasies'. 'Cost' is a typo for 'ghosts'. The sentence is incomplete and corrected for clarity and grammar.