Stories— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: حاول تبقى إجابتك أوضح وأبسط، وابتعد عن التكرار والأخطاء النحوية. استخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة في البداية، وبعدها وضّح السبب بشكل مرتب ومنطقي.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved stories when I was a child because I believed they were real. They also helped me feel calm and fall asleep easily.

Sugestão: ركز على ترتيب أفكارك واستخدم روابط بين الجمل لتوضيح تفضيلاتك. تجنب التكرار وكن محددًا في شرح الأسباب.

Exemplo: I enjoy both listening to and reading stories. However, I prefer listening because it helps me concentrate better. Also, I like reading stories from books rather than on my phone.

Sugestão: حاول التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل أكثر وضوحًا وبساطة، وتجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. استخدم جمل مترابطة لتوضيح رأيك.

Exemplo: No, I never wrote a story as a child because I thought only talented people could do that. But now, I believe writing stories is easier than I thought.

Sugestão: حاول استخدام مفردات أدق وتصحيح الأخطاء النحوية، واذكر أمثلة واضحة مع شرح بسيط عن سبب تفضيلك لهذه القصص.

Exemplo: I like stories about real life, such as Oliver Twist and Gulliver's Travels. I especially enjoy the Oxford Bookworms series because they teach valuable lessons about life and how to handle different situations.

× Of course I loved stories when I was in childhood because I see, I think I was thinking there that the stories is something real and the stories is the thing that made me sleep well.

✓ Of course I loved stories when I was a child because I saw, I think I was thinking then that the stories were something real and the stories were the things that made me sleep well.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'See' should be 'saw' to match past tense. 'Is' should be 'were' because the subject 'stories' is plural and the context is past. Also, 'in childhood' is unnatural; 'a child' is better. Use past tense consistently to describe past events.

× Of course I loved stories when I was in childhood because I see, I think I was thinking there that the stories is something real and the stories is the thing that made me sleep well.

✓ Of course I loved stories when I was a child because I saw, I think I was thinking then that the stories were something real and the stories were the things that made me sleep well.

The phrase 'in childhood' is not commonly used; 'when I was a child' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate age or time in life.

× Of course I loved stories when I was in childhood because I see, I think I was thinking there that the stories is something real and the stories is the thing that made me sleep well.

✓ Of course I loved stories when I was a child because I saw, I think I was thinking then that the stories were something real and the stories were the things that made me sleep well.

The subject 'stories' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular/plural forms.

× I prefer both listening to story and reading them.

✓ I prefer both listening to stories and reading them.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the plural pronoun 'them' and to be consistent with the context of multiple stories.

× Firstly I prefer listening to stories because it gives me the power and continue to listening and reading them just just on books, not in phone.

✓ Firstly, I prefer listening to stories because it gives me the power to continue listening and reading them just in books, not on the phone.

The prepositions 'on' and 'in' were used incorrectly. We say 'in books' and 'on the phone'. Also, 'continue to listening' should be 'continue listening' or 'continue to listen'.

× Firstly I prefer listening to stories because it gives me the power and continue to listening and reading them just just on books, not in phone.

✓ Firstly, I prefer listening to stories because it gives me the power to continue listening and reading them just in books, not on the phone.

The phrase 'not in phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on the phone' when referring to devices.

× No, I never did that because I think that stories, uh, the right, the, the talented one who could make that, not, uh, one like me, a child couldn't make things like that.

✓ No, I never did that because I thought that stories, uh, were for the right, the talented ones who could make them, not someone like me; a child couldn't make things like that.

The verb 'think' should be in past tense 'thought' to match the past context. Also, 'stories' is plural, so 'were' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× No, I never did that because I think that stories, uh, the right, the, the talented one who could make that, not, uh, one like me, a child couldn't make things like that.

✓ No, I never did that because I thought that stories, uh, were for the right, the talented ones who could make them, not someone like me; a child couldn't make things like that.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used to refer to 'stories' which is plural; 'them' is the correct pronoun for plural nouns.

× But after I grew up, I think that it's easy to write a story.

✓ But after I grew up, I thought that it was easy to write a story.

The sentence refers to a past reflection after growing up, so 'think' should be 'thought' and 'it's' should be 'it was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I like the stories that is talking about reality like the story of Oliver Twist and the Gulliver trophies, especially the stories of Oxford Bookworms collection that contains a lot of real stories about life and how to deal in your life.

✓ I like the stories that are about reality like the story of Oliver Twist and Gulliver's Travels, especially the stories in the Oxford Bookworms collection that contain a lot of real stories about life and how to deal with it.

The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'stories'. 'Gulliver trophies' is incorrect; the correct title is 'Gulliver's Travels'. 'Contains' should be 'contain' to agree with plural 'stories'. Also, 'deal in your life' should be 'deal with it' for correct preposition use.

× I like the stories that is talking about reality like the story of Oliver Twist and the Gulliver trophies, especially the stories of Oxford Bookworms collection that contains a lot of real stories about life and how to deal in your life.

✓ I like the stories that are about reality like the story of Oliver Twist and Gulliver's Travels, especially the stories in the Oxford Bookworms collection that contain a lot of real stories about life and how to deal with it.

The preposition 'of' should be 'in' when referring to a collection. Also, 'deal in your life' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'deal with it' or 'deal with life'.