Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, remove fillers (uh, um), correct grammar (e.g. 'people will just look at'), and add one specific detail about why the site helps you. Use one linking phrase if adding a reason.

Exemplo: I often visit accounting standards websites. They are useful because they provide up-to-date regulations and detailed examples that I can apply at work. For example, the site publishes illustrative case studies that explain how to implement new standards.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement, avoid repetition and colloquial fillers ('like'), correct grammar (e.g. 'gives the latest standards'), and add a specific example of a feature you use. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite site is the ASB accounting standards website. It gives the latest standards and publishes detailed case studies that show how companies apply those rules, which I use when preparing financial reports.

Sugestão: Answer directly and succinctly. Remove fillers and repeats; give one brief explanation or example about why there are no changes (e.g. no new standards published). Use a linking word if needed.

Exemplo: No, there have been no major changes recently because there haven't been any new accounting standards issued. As a result, the site content has stayed largely the same.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular), avoid 'like' and fillers, and provide one specific example or contrast (e.g. popular platforms or a buyer review example). Use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Shopping websites are very popular in my country because they offer detailed product information such as sizes and colours, and include customer reviews. For example, many people read reviews on XYZ platform before deciding to buy clothing online.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer, remove hesitations, and organize reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'however'). Add one specific instance where a website was more helpful than a book.

Exemplo: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and accessible on my smartphone. For example, when I need the latest accounting guidance, I can quickly search the official site, whereas a printed book may be out of date and hard to carry.

Sugestão: Respond clearly and give a short, well-structured explanation. Remove filler words and correct grammar (e.g. 'back in university', 'it contains my research information', 'helps people find my work'). Provide a concrete purpose for the site.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I created a website when I was at university to publish my research and professional information. It serves as a convenient portfolio so employers and colleagues can learn about my work.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence, remove hesitations, and correct grammar ('often' not 'oftenly', 'provides'). Give one specific example of a learning you applied and link it to an outcome (e.g. improved a report or solved a problem).

Exemplo: As an author, I regularly use the ASB accounting standards website to learn how rules are applied in practice. For example, a case study on revenue recognition helped me correctly prepare a section of a client’s financial report.

× people will just looking at the entertainment information on their smartphones.

✓ people will just be looking at entertainment information on their smartphones.

The original uses 'will' (future auxiliary) followed directly by the present participle 'looking' without the auxiliary 'be'. With 'will' to form the future continuous you need 'will be' + verb-ing. Use 'be looking' to show ongoing action in the future or general tendency.

× So for website I will just use the website to look for accounting standards which will give you a much more detailed information.

✓ So for websites I will just use them to look for accounting standards which will give you much more detailed information.

The learner mixed singular and plural ('for website' then 'the website') and used 'a much more detailed information' (information is uncountable). Use plural 'websites' and a plural pronoun 'them'; remove the article 'a' before 'detailed information'.

× My favorite website will be the double ASB accounting standard website as it give you like the most latest standards which can really help for my work and it can also give you like a detailed case like show how the company's standard working.

✓ My favorite website is the ASB accounting standards website because it gives the latest standards that really help with my work, and it also provides detailed case studies showing how a company's standards are applied.

'Will be' is unnecessary for a preference—use present simple 'is'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it give' should be 'it gives'. 'Most latest' is redundant; use 'the latest'. 'Can really help for my work' should be 'help with my work'. 'Give you like a detailed case like show' is ungrammatical; use 'provides detailed case studies showing...' and use passive or present continuous 'are applied' for standard application.

× Uh, no recently, cause recently there is no big change like in the accounting standards.

✓ No, not recently, because there have not been any big changes in the accounting standards.

Use present perfect 'have not been' to describe changes up to now. 'There is no big change like in the accounting standards' is awkward—use 'any big changes in the accounting standards' and include 'because' instead of 'cause' in formal speech.

× So, uh, I don't think there is changes recently.

✓ So, uh, I don't think there are changes recently.

Subject-verb agreement with 'changes' (plural) requires 'are' not 'is'. However, more natural is 'I don't think there have been any changes recently' using present perfect.

× Shopping website are pretty popular in my country as they will provide you a variety of products details like the size and the colors and it also gives you like a review comments of previous buyers.

✓ Shopping websites are pretty popular in my country because they provide a variety of product details like sizes and colors, and they also give review comments from previous buyers.

Use plural 'websites' and match with 'are'. 'Provide you a variety of products details' should be 'provide a variety of product details'. 'Size' and 'colors' should be plural 'sizes' and 'colors'. 'It also gives you like a review comments' mixes singular and plural and awkward phrasing—use 'they also give review comments'.

× Those things can really help you.

✓ Those features can really help you.

'Those things' is vague; 'features' or 'aspects' is clearer. Grammatically the sentence is acceptable, but a more precise noun improves clarity.

× Uh, I actually prefer getting information from website because it's more convenient.

✓ Uh, I actually prefer getting information from websites because it's more convenient.

Countable noun 'website' should be plural 'websites' when speaking generally. 'Getting' as a gerund is fine here.

× Also, it will be easier to check information through website on your smartphone.

✓ Also, it will be easier to check information on websites using your smartphone.

Use plural 'websites' and the preposition 'on' for 'on websites' and 'using your smartphone' is clearer than 'through website on your smartphone'.

× However, a book may be not easy to carry.

✓ However, a book may not be easy to carry.

Position of 'not' should be before the adjective 'easy' or after 'may' as 'may not be'. 'May be not' is unnatural; use 'may not be'.

× Uh, yes, I'd like to have my own website. Uh, I actually created one before back to my uni.

✓ Uh, yes, I'd like to have my own website. Uh, I actually created one before I went back to university.

'Before back to my uni' is ungrammatical. Use a clause 'before I went back to university' or 'before returning to university'. 'Uni' is informal but acceptable; ensure correct verb tense for the time sequence.

× Uh, that website sometimes like all my, uh, research information, uh, is uh, convenient way people can know you.

✓ That website sometimes contains all my research information and is a convenient way for people to learn about me.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Contains' fits for holding information. Use 'a convenient way for people to learn about me' rather than 'people can know you', which has incorrect pronoun and structure.

× Uh, well, as an author, I have to check the accounting standards, uh, quite oftenly.

✓ Uh, well, as an author, I have to check the accounting standards quite often.

'Oftenly' is not a word; use 'often'. Place the adverb after the verb phrase 'have to check' or at the end: 'have to check quite often'.

× So I usually like check the, uh, double ASP accounting standards through their website.

✓ So I usually check the ASB accounting standards through their website.

'Like check' is awkward; use either 'like to check' or simply 'check'. 'Double ASP' seems incorrect—likely 'ASB'. Use 'usually check' for habitual action.

× Uh, it provide me a detailed case of how those accounting standards will be applied in real life.

✓ Uh, it provides me with detailed case examples of how those accounting standards are applied in real life.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it provide' should be 'it provides'. 'Provide someone with something' is the correct pattern. Use 'case examples' or 'case studies' and present simple passive 'are applied' for general application.