Watch— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers, correct grammar (use "nowadays" and "phones"), and give one specific reason with a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually wear a watch because nowadays my phone serves that purpose. For example, it's more convenient to check the time and it also shows notifications and apps, so I rarely need a separate watch.

Sugestão: Use a clear past-tense response and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific details (whose gift, when, and why). Correct grammar and finish the thought—explain what the encouragement was for.

Exemplo: Yes. I received a watch from my parents for my 16th birthday as a present. They gave it to encourage me to be punctual for school and important events.

Sugestão: Provide a concise opinion with clear reasons and examples. Avoid hesitations and duplicate phrases. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" to structure your answer.

Exemplo: I think some people wear expensive watches because they see them as status symbols. For example, high-end brands can signal wealth or success, and wearing such a watch can make a strong impression in professional or social situations.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use natural phrasing. Avoid greetings like "Hi," repeat phrases, and finish the sentence with a clear additional reason or example. Use 2–3 sentences maximum.

Exemplo: No, I don't think it's necessary to wear a watch because most people carry smartphones that show the time. Moreover, phones provide alarms and calendars, so they cover the main functions of a watch.

× No, I don't really wear a watch because I think umm in nowadays, uh, phone can totally act as a watch and this is more convenient to see what time is it and it has a other things.

✓ No, I don't really wear a watch because I think nowadays a phone can totally act as a watch and it is more convenient to check the time, and it has other functions.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'in nowadays' should be 'nowadays'; wrong word order 'see what time is it' should be 'check the time' (indirect question order); 'a other things' should be 'other things' or 'other functions'. Suggestion: use 'nowadays' without a preposition, use 'check the time' for natural phrasing, and use plural noun without 'a' or choose a more specific noun like 'functions'.

× Yes, I do ever have a watch as a gift it was my 16th birthday and in that time my parents send me a watch as a gift as a birthday gift and to encourage me to my.

✓ Yes, I have received a watch as a gift. It was for my 16th birthday, and at that time my parents gave me a watch as a birthday present to encourage me.

Errors: 'do ever have' is ungrammatical for past experience — use present perfect 'have received' or past 'received'; sentence run-on and wrong past tense 'send' should be 'gave' or 'sent'; unclear phrase 'to encourage me to my' is incomplete — changed to 'to encourage me'. Suggestion: use 'have received' for experience or 'received' for a specific past event, use past tense 'gave', and break into shorter sentences for clarity.

× In my opinion, I think this kind of people must regard expensive watch as a symbol to, to high status or something, fame, uh, symbol and that thing that I can really tell.

✓ In my opinion, I think these kinds of people regard an expensive watch as a symbol of high status or fame; I can tell that from their behavior.

Errors: 'this kind of people' should be 'these kinds of people' or 'this kind of person'; missing article before 'expensive watch' -> 'an expensive watch'; preposition 'symbol to' should be 'symbol of'; awkward clause 'that thing that I can really tell' rephrased for clarity. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms, include articles before countable nouns, use 'symbol of', and express the final idea clearly.

× Hi, I don't think it's important to wear a watch because in the contemporary, in this contemporary, I think a phone that everybody carries on every time, anytime and can totally act as a watch and also it has other.

✓ No, I don't think it's important to wear a watch because today people usually carry phones all the time, and a phone can act as a watch and also has other features.

Errors: awkward phrase 'in the contemporary, in this contemporary' should be 'today' or 'in contemporary times'; unnecessary 'that' and wrong verb forms 'carries' should be 'carry' to agree with plural 'people'; 'every time, anytime' redundant; incomplete 'it has other' should be 'it has other features'. Suggestion: use 'people carry phones' for subject-verb agreement, simplify redundancy, and complete the noun phrase describing additional functions.