Friends— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn về thời gian, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, hãy nói rõ bạn đã quen người bạn đó bao lâu và những hoạt động bạn thường làm cùng nhau.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a best friend whom I have known for six years. We met in secondary school and have spent a lot of time playing and studying together since then.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "ratification" và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn. Hãy mô tả cụ thể các hoạt động bạn làm với bạn bè và cảm xúc của bạn khi ở bên họ.

Exemplo: I usually hang out with my friends by going shopping, having dinner together, and enjoying fun activities. Spending time with them makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Sugestão: Bạn cần nói rõ địa điểm gặp gỡ và tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa như "censure" hay "ratification". Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý tưởng của bạn.

Exemplo: We usually meet in the city center where there are many places to have dinner or go shopping together.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về tần suất đi chơi với bạn bè và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy sắp xếp câu mạch lạc và dùng từ phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go out with my friends two or three times a week. Sometimes, my mom and her friends also join us when we go out.

Sugestão: Bạn cần diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Hãy nói cụ thể về vai trò của bạn bè trong cuộc sống của bạn và cảm xúc khi ở bên họ.

Exemplo: I think my friends are very important because they support me during difficult times. When I am with them, I feel relaxed and happy.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng. Hãy giải thích lý do bạn thích dành thời gian với nhóm bạn và cảm nhận của bạn về điều đó.

Exemplo: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because I am an extrovert. It is more fun to talk and share stories with many people.

Sugestão: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Hãy mô tả cụ thể về việc mời bạn bè đến nhà và những hoạt động bạn làm cùng họ.

Exemplo: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home. We watch movies together and enjoy snacks while spending time with my family.

× I haven't know her for six years ago.

✓ I have known her for six years.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'haven't know' which is not a correct past tense or present perfect form. The correct present perfect form is 'have known'. Also, 'for six years ago' is incorrect; 'for six years' is used to indicate duration, while 'ago' indicates a point in the past. Use either 'for six years' or 'six years ago' but not both.

× We play together an much a met together in secondary school.

✓ We played together and met a lot in secondary school.

The sentence has incorrect use of 'an much a met'. It should be 'and met a lot' to indicate frequent meetings. Also, 'play' should be in past tense 'played' to match the past time frame 'in secondary school'.

× We play together now.

✓ We play together now.

This sentence is correct as it uses present tense appropriately to describe current action.

× I usually go hang out with my friend, assemble, like to have fun dinner all, like to go shopping and have many ratification because when I wake her I really feel relaxed and happy.

✓ I usually hang out with my friend, assemble, like to have fun dinners, like to go shopping and have many celebrations because when I meet her I really feel relaxed and happy.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and word choices: 'go hang out' should be 'hang out'; 'fun dinner all' is unclear and corrected to 'fun dinners'; 'ratification' is incorrect and replaced with 'celebrations'; 'wake her' is incorrect and replaced with 'meet her'.

× I usually. Meet each other in censure of city.

✓ I usually meet each other in the center of the city.

The phrase 'censure of city' is incorrect; it should be 'center of the city'. Also, 'meet each other' is acceptable here.

× Uh, in the uh have many function to have ratification with my friend like to having dinner or.

✓ There are many functions to have celebrations with my friend, like having dinner.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and word forms: 'have many function' should be 'there are many functions'; 'ratification' is incorrect and replaced with 'celebrations'; 'like to having dinner' corrected to 'like having dinner'.

× Is really is a go shopping.

✓ We really like to go shopping.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Corrected to a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× Yes, I often go out with my friend to two 2-3 days of quick because my mom is a. Permit me to go hang out with my friend and my mom and ho her mothers is we go hang out with together an.

✓ Yes, I often go out with my friend for 2-3 days because my mom permits me to hang out with my friend, and sometimes my mom and her mother go out with us together.

The sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and sentence structure. 'Permit' should be 'permits' to agree with 'my mom'. 'to two 2-3 days of quick' is incorrect and replaced with 'for 2-3 days'. The rest is restructured for clarity.

× I think my friend is very important for me because they easily do with my difficult time for me an when I.

✓ I think my friends are very important to me because they easily help me during difficult times.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular 'my friend' with plural pronoun 'they'. Corrected to plural 'friends' and 'are'. Also, 'do with my difficult time' is incorrect and replaced with 'help me during difficult times'.

× Go go home with her, I really feel relax and do that pirate anytime.

✓ When I go home with her, I really feel relaxed and comfortable anytime.

The sentence has repeated 'go go' and incorrect verb forms 'feel relax' and 'do that pirate'. Corrected to proper present tense and appropriate expressions.

× I prefer spend time with a group of friends because I'm a person, is an extrovert and I want to.

✓ I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because I am an extrovert person and I want to.

The sentence is incomplete but corrected for preposition 'prefer to spend' and sentence structure.

× Go home with a group of friends is a which is 1/2 many fun to talk with.

✓ Going out with a group of friends is much more fun to talk with.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to a proper sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× I have a job of gossip with friend.

✓ I like to gossip with friends.

The phrase 'have a job of gossip' is incorrect. Corrected to 'like to gossip'. Also, 'friend' changed to plural 'friends'.

× Yes, I invite friend to my home because Oh my friend wants to come in my home because I in there they.

✓ Yes, I invite friends to my home because my friends want to come to my home because when they are there,

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and structure. 'friend' changed to plural 'friends'; 'come in my home' corrected to 'come to my home'; 'I in there they' is unclear and corrected to 'when they are there'.

× Have to watch a similaun have many snack to eat an watching it.

✓ We watch a simulation, have many snacks to eat, and watch it together.

The sentence has incorrect words and prepositions: 'similaun' corrected to 'simulation'; 'have many snack' corrected to 'have many snacks'; 'an watching it' corrected to 'and watch it'.

× Each other of an my mom in my gram mother.

✓ Together with my mom and my grandmother.

The phrase is unclear and ungrammatical. Corrected to a proper phrase indicating being together with mom and grandmother.