Friends— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, mention how long you've known your friend and how you maintain the friendship.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since childhood. We met at school and have stayed in touch ever since. We communicate regularly and meet up often to catch up.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about activities you do with friends and avoid unclear or incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Usually, my friends and I spend time together when we are free. We often discuss our future plans, goals, and family matters. Additionally, we talk about how to solve problems we face.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly where you meet your friend. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to explain the context or reasons for meeting there.

Exemplo: Nowadays, my friend works as a shopkeeper, and I usually visit him at his shop on weekends when I am free. We meet there to talk about various things, including current events and challenges we face.

Sugestão: Give a clear and concise answer about how often you go out with friends and what activities you do. Use correct grammar and avoid confusing phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go out with my friends. Sometimes we plan trips to different places, including religious sites. We enjoy spending time together and exploring new areas.

Sugestão: Express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain why friends are important.

Exemplo: Friends are very important in our lives because they support us during difficult times. When I face problems, my friends help me, which makes life easier and more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly state your preference. Use correct grammar and explain your reason with linking words.

Exemplo: It depends on the person, but I prefer spending time with one friend because it is easier to build trust and have meaningful conversations than in a large group.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use proper sentence structure and provide specific examples of occasions when you invite friends home.

Exemplo: Yes, I often invite friends to my home for different occasions, such as birthday parties or other events. We enjoy spending time together and celebrating special moments.

× Yes I have a friend, I know him for a long time.

✓ Yes, I have a friend; I have known him for a long time.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'know' to describe a duration starting in the past and continuing to the present. The present perfect tense 'have known' is appropriate to express this ongoing relationship.

× I'm not him before when I was childhood in study I made him in the school.

✓ I did not know him before; when I was a child, I met him at school.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and structure. 'I'm not him before' is incorrect; the past simple 'did not know' is needed. 'I made him in the school' is incorrect; 'met him at school' is the correct expression for first meeting someone.

× So I'm so stay connected to each other and communicate together.

✓ So we stay connected to each other and communicate regularly.

The phrase 'I'm so stay' is grammatically incorrect. The subject should be 'we' to match 'each other', and the verb should be in the simple present tense 'stay' to indicate habitual action.

× We are meet regularly.

✓ We meet regularly.

The present continuous 'are meet' is incorrect; the simple present 'meet' is used to describe habitual actions.

× Here we are spending it together, time together when we are free.

✓ We spend time together when we are free.

The phrase 'are spending it together, time together' is redundant and awkward. The simple present 'spend' is appropriate for habitual actions.

× So I'm talking about the planning for future.

✓ So I am talking about planning for the future.

The phrase 'the planning for future' is awkward; 'planning for the future' is the correct expression. Also, 'I'm talking' is acceptable but 'I am talking' is clearer.

× So what is about I? I will be humid and goals.

✓ So what about me? I will have hopes and goals.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'What is about I?' should be 'What about me?'. 'I will be humid and goals' is incorrect; likely intended 'I will have hopes and goals'.

× So we're talking about the families and other things out and how we can resolve.

✓ So we talk about families and other things and how we can resolve problems.

The present continuous 'we're talking' is less appropriate here; simple present 'we talk' is better for habitual actions. Also, 'families' without 'the' is more general.

× Some problems.

✓ Some problems.

This fragment is incomplete; it should be connected to the previous sentence for clarity.

× Now a day my friend is making a shopkeeper, I'm going to his job in the library, so I mostly going to on the weekend when I only free so we are communicated to each other so discuss about things.

✓ Nowadays, my friend is a shopkeeper. I go to his workplace in the library mostly on weekends when I am free. We communicate with each other to discuss things.

Multiple errors: 'Now a day' should be 'Nowadays'; 'is making a shopkeeper' is incorrect, should be 'is a shopkeeper'; 'I'm going to his job' should be 'I go to his workplace'; 'I mostly going to on the weekend' should be 'I mostly go on weekends'; 'we are communicated' is incorrect, should be 'we communicate'.

× So what is that happened in the society so we're how facing up problems.

✓ So we discuss what is happening in society and how we face problems.

The sentence has incorrect tense and structure. 'What is that happened' should be 'what is happening'; 'we're how facing up problems' should be 'we face problems'.

× Yes, 'cause I'm up, I'm going to the outside with my friends.

✓ Yes, because I go outside with my friends.

'I'm up' is unclear and incorrect; 'I'm going to the outside' is awkward, better as 'I go outside'.

× So sometime we are planning to go through anywhere, religion place.

✓ Sometimes we plan to go to different places, like religious sites.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'we are planning' is better as 'we plan' for habitual actions; 'go through anywhere' is incorrect, should be 'go to different places'; 'religion place' should be 'religious sites'.

× So we are going together, sometime we're going to with Varian, sometime we can going to alone.

✓ So we go together; sometimes we go with Varian; sometimes we go alone.

Incorrect verb forms: 'are going' should be 'go' for habitual actions; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'we're going to with Varian' is incorrect, should be 'we go with Varian'; 'we can going to alone' is incorrect, should be 'we go alone'.

× So there are we are enjoying their time and spending attempt of others.

✓ So we enjoy our time and spend time together.

'Their time' and 'attempt of others' are incorrect pronoun uses; should be 'our time' and 'spend time together'.

× It's feeling.

✓ It feels good.

'It's feeling' is incomplete and unclear; 'It feels good' is a proper expression.

× Your friend is very important for our lives because he's a we are when we are if I'm a problem, so we have doing are helping to each other.

✓ Friends are very important in our lives because when we have a problem, we help each other.

Incorrect pronoun use and sentence structure. 'Your friend' should be 'Friends'; 'he's a we are' is incorrect; 'if I'm a problem' should be 'when we have a problem'; 'we have doing are helping' should be 'we help'.

× So it is very important for every lives every time standing viewer is difficult situation and they.

✓ So it is very important in everyone's life to support each other during difficult situations.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect words. 'Every lives' should be 'everyone's life'; 'every time standing viewer is difficult situation and they' is unclear and corrected to 'to support each other during difficult situations'.

× There it is depended tutti what are your nature or some people.

✓ It depends on your nature or personality.

'There it is depended tutti' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'It depends on your nature or personality'.

× Some persons are prepared to spending more time with friends, woman says some is J. Branford to workgroup, but I prefer the one friend.

✓ Some people prefer spending more time with friends; some prefer working in groups, but I prefer one friend.

Incorrect pronouns and unclear words: 'Some persons' should be 'Some people'; 'woman says some is J. Branford to workgroup' is unclear and corrected to 'some prefer working in groups'; 'the one friend' should be 'one friend'.

× Oh, Orby 'cause you work you cannot believe on every Frances so I prefer to the one friends.

✓ Because when you work, you cannot trust every friend, so I prefer one friend.

Incorrect pronouns and words: 'Orby' unclear; 'Frances' should be 'friends'; 'prefer to the one friends' should be 'prefer one friend'.

× Just 'cause I'm often invited to the front of the home and different type of different occasions, sometimes I have a birthday party, sometime I have organized events or so we I'm regularly invited to my friend so we are enjoined to sand spending our time together.

✓ I am often invited to my friends' homes for different occasions. Sometimes I have a birthday party or organize events. We regularly spend time together and enjoy it.

Multiple errors: 'front of the home' should be 'friends' homes'; 'different type of different occasions' is redundant; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'I have organized events or so' is unclear; 'we are enjoined to sand spending' is incorrect, corrected to 'we regularly spend time together and enjoy it'.