Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: ปรับโครงสร้างให้ชัดเจนขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงๆ จากนั้นให้รายละเอียดที่เฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำเชื่อมเล็กน้อย เช่น “because” หรือ “for example” และแก้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น คำนามเอกพจน์/พหูพจน์ และคำสรรพนาม ตัวอย่างข้อเสนอแนะเฉพาะ: เปลี่ยน “in the TV channel” เป็น “on TV”, ใช้ “advertisements” แทน “advertisement”, และอธิบายว่าโฆษณาแบบไหนที่ทำให้ประทับใจ (เช่น การ์ตูน เพลง หรือการใช้สีสัน)

Exemplo: Yes. I remember some TV advertisements that impressed me as a child because they used catchy songs and bright colours. For example, a cartoon-style commercial for a snack had a memorable jingle and funny characters that made me excited to ask my parents to buy it.

Sugestão: ทำให้ประโยคตรงและชัดเจนมากขึ้น แก้ไวยากรณ์ (เช่น ลบคำว่า “in” ที่เกิน, ใช้ “advertisements” และ “information” ไม่ใช้พหูพจน์ผิด) และเพิ่มรายละเอียดเฉพาะ เช่น ประเภทของโฆษณาที่เห็นหรือตัวอย่าง ทำให้เชื่อมด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น “so” หรือ “for example”

Exemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements when I use public transport, so I learn about new products and events. For example, posters on buses often advertise concerts or local stores, which helps me know what is happening in my city.

Sugestão: ตอบให้ชัดว่า ‘ชอบหรือไม่’ แล้วอธิบายเหตุผลแยกตามแพลตฟอร์ม แก้ไวยากรณ์ (เช่น “It depends”, “sometimes”, “interrupts my interest”) และหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคไม่สมบูรณ์ เพิ่มตัวอย่างประกอบเพื่อชัดเจน

Exemplo: It depends. I dislike ads on YouTube because they frequently interrupt videos and break my concentration. However, I don't mind advertisements on public transport because they are less intrusive and sometimes share useful local information.

Sugestão: เริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงๆ และใช้คำศัพท์ถูกต้อง (เช่น “I like” ไม่ใช่ “I lie”), ระบุประเภทโฆษณาอย่างชัดเจนและให้เหตุผลที่เฉพาะ เช่น “public service announcements” ช่วยให้ข้อมูลสาธารณะ ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น “because” และแก้การสะกดคำและไวยากรณ์

Exemplo: I like public service advertisements, especially those on public transport, because they provide important news and health information. For example, government posters about vaccination or disaster safety are useful and easy for everyone to see.

Sugestão: ตอบโดยตรงและชัดเจน แก้ไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ (เช่น “ads that target my interests” หรือ “ads tailored to me”), อธิบายผลกระทบอย่างเจาะจง เช่น ทำให้รู้สึกเบื่อหรือได้ข้อเสนอที่เป็นประโยชน์ ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, many of which are targeted to my interests. Sometimes they are helpful because they recommend useful products, but other times I feel overwhelmed and bored by the large number of ads.

× Of course, in the TV channel there are many advertisement that made an impression on me when I was young.

✓ Of course, on TV there are many advertisements that made an impression on me when I was young.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural ('advertisements') because 'many' requires a plural noun; 'in the TV channel' is unnatural, so use 'on TV'. Suggestion: use plural form with quantifiers like 'many' and choose natural prepositions ('on TV').

× When I saw that, I felt excited and impressed about the creative.

✓ When I saw them, I felt excited and impressed by the creativity.

'Impressed about the creative' is incorrect collocation; use 'impressed by' and the noun 'creativity'. Also 'that' should match plural 'advertisements' -> 'them'. Suggestion: use correct preposition with 'impressed' and use the noun 'creativity' rather than 'creative'.

× Of course, in when I was in the public transport, I always see some of advertisement and then I know about more informations or publication from this advertisement page.

✓ Of course, when I was using public transport, I always saw some advertisements and learned more information or publications from those ads.

Problems: 'in when' is redundant; use 'when I was using'. 'public transport' is count/uncount nuance—'using public transport' is natural. 'see' should match past 'was' -> 'saw'. 'some of advertisement' incorrect; use 'some advertisements'. 'informations' is uncountable -> 'information'. Suggestion: match tense, use plural nouns correctly, and use 'information' without -s.

× It's depends on the advertisements on the platforms.

✓ It depends on the advertisements on the platforms.

'It's depends' mixes contraction 'it is' with verb 'depends'; use 'It depends' (no contraction + s) or 'It's dependent on' for different meaning. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb form: 'It depends'.

× Sometime on the YouTube channel.

✓ Sometimes on YouTube.

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb) not 'Sometime' and drop 'the' before 'YouTube'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for frequency and platform names without 'the'.

× I think it's a interrupt my interesting on video, but for in the train or the public transportation it seem like that is.

✓ I think it interrupts my interest in videos, but on trains or public transportation it seems okay.

Multiple issues: 'it's a interrupt' wrong article and form; use verb 'interrupts'. 'my interesting' should be 'my interest'. 'on video' -> 'in videos'. 'for in the train or the public transportation' -> 'on trains or public transportation'. 'it seem like that is' -> 'it seems okay' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct noun forms and prepositions.

× I lie about the public advertisement from the government that broadcast in the public transport.

✓ I like the public advertisements from the government that are broadcast on public transport.

'I lie' is wrong verb; should be 'I like'. 'advertisement' -> plural 'advertisements' with 'public'. 'that broadcast' needs passive 'that are broadcast'. Use 'on public transport' preposition. Suggestion: choose correct verb, pluralize when needed, and use passive for broadcast content.

× It seem like that they have intention to broadcast some news and information to public known and underst.

✓ It seems like they intend to broadcast news and information to make the public aware and informed.

'It seem' needs 'seems' for subject-verb agreement. 'have intention to' -> 'intend to'. 'to public known and underst' is ungrammatical; use 'to make the public aware and informed'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing for purpose.

× Of course, nowadays on the online platforms I always see the advertisement that the pursuing my interesting or my willing.

✓ Of course, nowadays on online platforms I always see advertisements that pursue my interests or match my preferences.

'the online platforms' -> 'online platforms' more natural. 'see the advertisement' -> plural 'advertisements'. 'that the pursuing my interesting or my willing' is ungrammatical: use 'that pursue my interests' or 'match my preferences'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and noun phrases and pluralize appropriately.

× Sometime I feel bored about the more information.

✓ Sometimes I feel bored by the excess information.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'bored about the more information' is odd; use 'bored by the excess information' or 'overwhelmed by too much information'. Suggestion: use appropriate quantifier ('too much' or 'excess') and correct adverb form.