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Sugestão: 回答不够清晰、句子结构混乱且信息杂乱。需要先用一句话直接回答问题，然后用1–2句具体描述广告的内容和为什么印象深刻，句子保持简短并使用连接词如“because”或“which”来组织细节。注意语法（时态、主谓一致）和单词选择。

Exemplo: One advertisement that impressed me as a child was about family love. It showed a large tree sheltering two small trees, which symbolized parents protecting their children, and I remember it because it felt very warm and emotional.

Sugestão: 回答较直接但表达重复且有语法和用词问题。建议先直接回答（Yes），然后用一至两句具体说明在哪些位置看到广告，使用连接词如“for example, on”或“inside”并避免冗长的并列句。提高流利度可以通过练习简短准确的句子实现。

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport. For example, on the subway there are posters on the walls and ads inside the train, and on planes I often notice ads on the backs of seats.

Sugestão: 回答包含观点但不够连贯且有语法错误。建议先给出明确立场（e.g. It depends），然后用一至两句具体说明什么时候会觉得烦和什么时候觉得可以接受，使用连接词like “if” 和 “when”。注意冠词和复数形式。

Exemplo: It depends. If I see too many advertisements in my daily life, I feel annoyed, but if there are only a few, I feel comfortable because they are less intrusive.

Sugestão: 回答含糊且句子不通顺。建议先用一句话说明喜好（e.g. I like surprising or creative ads），然后用1–2句具体说明原因并举例，使用连词如 “because” 或 “for example”。避免重复和不完整的表达。

Exemplo: I like surprising and creative advertisements because they catch my attention. For example, an ad that appears only in one unexpected place or uses a clever twist is more memorable to me.

Sugestão: 回答基本能传达意思但有很多语法、词序和冗余问题。建议直接回答（Yes），然后用一至两句说明在哪些应用或位置常见广告（e.g. video apps, website sidebars），并用连接词 like “usually” 和 “for example”。精简表达并注意动词形式。

Exemplo: Yes, I see them quite often. Usually when I open video apps there are mandatory ads, and on websites ads often appear in the right sidebar or as pop-ups.

× Yes, I do the advertisement that I'm remembering my childhood is the topic is the love and family and the details is the kind of a tree grow up a big two big hens to take care of a another little trees then it's.

✓ Yes. The advertisement I remember from my childhood was about love and family. It showed a big tree growing and two large hens taking care of some little trees.

问题类型：句子结构错误（ID 26）。原句杂乱无章，含有多处时态、主谓不一致和冗余结构，难以理解。建议把意思拆成几句：先表明“我记得的广告”的主题（过去式was），然后描述广告内容（用简单句，主谓一致）。避免使用冗余的“is/are”重复结构。

× Yes, I see a lot of advertisements such as I take the subway every day, I see the advertisement on the wall and even inside the train and sometimes I take the plane, there is half advertisement on the back ahead.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements. I take the subway every day, so I see advertisements on the walls and inside the trains. Sometimes when I take a plane, there are advertisements on the back of the seats.

问题类型：现在时使用（ID 6）。原句时态和主谓搭配不够清晰，且单复数、词序错误（如“there is half advertisement on the back ahead”表达不当）。建议分句表达，使用现在时描述习惯性动作（I take... I see...），并注意可数名词的复数形式（advertisements, trains）和存在句的正确结构（there are advertisements on the back of the seats）。

× Umm it's hard to say. It's depends where I can see the advertisement. If I see too many advertisement on my daily life, I will feel such as annoying and there's have an advertisement little I feel comfortable.

✓ Umm, it's hard to say. It depends on where I see the advertisements. If I see too many advertisements in my daily life, I feel annoyed; if there are only a few advertisements, I feel comfortable.

问题类型：代词与相关短语使用不当（ID 12）。原句中“It's depends”应为“It depends”，“where I can see”在此情境用“where I see”更自然。注意可数名词复数（advertisements），以及固定搭配“feel annoyed”而不是“feel such as annoying”。存在句也错误地使用“there's have”，应改为“if there are only a few advertisements”。建议学习常用表达（It depends on...；feel annoyed/comfortable；few vs a lot）。

× Uh, it's kind of like very makes people surprised advertisements. I would like just like you never see anyone else and in another place, just in the one place.

✓ Uh, I like advertisements that surprise people. I prefer ads that are unique—things you haven't seen anywhere else and that appear in one special place.

问题类型：形容词或副词使用错误（ID 13）。原句语序和词类混用（“very makes people surprised advertisements”不符合英语结构）。建议使用定语从句或形容词短语修饰名词，例如“advertisements that surprise people”或“unique advertisements”。避免把动词和形容词混在名词短语中。

× Yes, it's quite often when I open some video apps, there's must be have the advertisement be be or open the app and the computer is. Sometimes the advertisement will show up in the right.

✓ Yes, it happens quite often. When I open video apps, there must be advertisements playing or appearing when I open them on my computer. Sometimes advertisements show up on the right side of the screen.

问题类型：动词+ -ing形式/动词形式错误（ID 8）。原句混乱使用助动词和存在结构（“there's must be have”错误重叠），并且动名词或现在分词使用不当。建议用简单陈述句表达习惯性发生（it happens / there are advertisements），并用现在分词或动名词时注意正确结构（playing / appearing）。同时修正“on the right”为更完整的“on the right side of the screen”。