Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (avoid double negatives and wrong collocations), and give one specific example with a brief reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I can't think of a single ad that stood out when I was a child, but I often remember creative commercials. For example, a cartoon-style advert for a cereal used a catchy jingle and amusing characters, so it stayed in my memory. Because the idea was original and entertaining, I could recall it years later.

Sugestão: Answer directly then add two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (use 'widely spread' or 'widespread'; avoid repetition like 'banners, the street banners'). Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'in addition' to make it cohesive.

Exemplo: Yes, I see advertisements everywhere on public transport. For example, trains often have full-panel posters and inside carriages there are digital screens; in addition, I encounter many ads on my phone and on websites, so it is hard to avoid them.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence stating your overall opinion, then explain two specific conditions with linking words (e.g., 'however', 'on the other hand'). Avoid fillers like 'umm' and incomplete sentences. Use precise vocabulary like 'targeted ads' and 'irrelevant'.

Exemplo: I don't always like advertisements; however, some can be useful. For instance, targeted ads that match a product I just searched for are helpful because they save time. On the other hand, poorly targeted or repetitive ads are annoying and intrusive.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example and reason. Correct grammar ('come up with new ideas') and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to add coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer creative advertising because it offers something fresh. For example, a clever billboard that uses optical illusion caught my attention; because most ads feel repetitive, originality makes an advertisement memorable.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer, then explain with two specific examples and one reason. Avoid repeating phrases ('everywhere', 'every website') and use correct phrasing ('websites', 'widely used').

Exemplo: Yes, I see advertisements frequently on my phone and computer. For example, many websites display banner ads and some play short video adverts; this is because site owners earn revenue from ad placements, making them very common online.

× There is no any specific advertisement that really hugged me, but I appreciate that advertisement with creative ideas.

✓ There was no specific advertisement that really impressed me, but I appreciate advertisements with creative ideas.

Use of 'There is no any' is ungrammatical; choose 'There was no' to match past reference 'when you were a child' and use singular/plural and article correctly: 'no specific advertisement' or 'no advertisements'. 'Hugged me' is an incorrect verb choice for emotional impression; use 'impressed me'. Also 'that advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match general meaning. Suggestion: say 'There was no specific advertisement that really impressed me, but I appreciate advertisements with creative ideas.'

× These really stick with me for a very long time because the idea is so good.

✓ These really stuck with me for a very long time because the ideas were so good.

The question asks about childhood impressions, so past tense is required. 'These' refers to 'advertisements' (plural), so use 'stuck' (past) and 'ideas were' to match plural and past context. Also 'the idea is so good' should be plural or past. Suggestion: align tense and number: 'These really stuck with me because the ideas were so good.'

× It's not. It's a very hard to forget.

✓ It's not — it's very hard to forget.

Original has a fragmented sentence 'It's not.' with unclear reference and incorrect article usage 'a very hard to forget'. Use a dash or conjunction to connect ideas, remove the extraneous 'a', and use adjective/infinitive structure 'hard to forget'. Suggestion: 'It's not; it's very hard to forget.'

× Yes, advertisements are everywhere nowadays, through the banners, the street banners, Internet and everywhere on our phone, on TV's.

✓ Yes, advertisements are everywhere nowadays: on banners, on the street, on the Internet, on our phones, and on TV.

Errors include article misuse and awkward prepositional phrases. 'the banners' and 'the street banners' are unnecessary; use 'on banners' and 'on the street'. 'Internet' needs 'the Internet'. 'phone' should be plural 'phones'. 'TV's' is incorrect possessive; use 'TV' or 'TVs' as plural. Also list items with consistent prepositions. Suggestion: 'on banners, on the street, on the Internet, on our phones, and on TV.'

× There are widely spreaded and it's very hard to try to avoid them.

✓ They are widely spread and it's very hard to avoid them.

Incorrect past participle 'spreaded' (correct form is 'spread'). Also the sentence lacks a clear subject; begin with 'They are' rather than 'There are'. Remove redundant 'try to' before 'avoid' since 'hard to avoid' is natural. Suggestion: 'They are widely spread and it's very hard to avoid them.'

× Not always. I like when I search for something and an ad shows up to show me what exactly I'm looking for.

✓ Not always. I like it when I search for something and an ad appears that shows me exactly what I'm looking for.

The clause 'I like when I search' needs an object 'it' ('I like it when...'). 'An ad shows up to show me' is repetitive; rephrase 'an ad appears that shows me exactly what I'm looking for.' Also 'shows up' is informal; 'appears' is clearer. Suggestion: 'I like it when I search for something and an ad appears that shows me exactly what I'm looking for.'

× But widely targeted ads that don't interest me? They are usually very annoying and umm.

✓ But widely targeted ads that don't interest me are usually very annoying.

Original uses a question fragment then a separate sentence 'They are...' Better to combine into one declarative sentence. Remove filler 'umm'. Also pronoun 'They' is acceptable but combining improves clarity. Suggestion: 'But widely targeted ads that don't interest me are usually very annoying.'

× I like advertising that has creative ideas.

✓ I like advertisements that have creative ideas.

'Advertising' (uncountable) is acceptable, but following 'has creative ideas' mismatches number: 'advertisements' (plural) should 'have' plural verb. If keeping 'advertising' use 'has' and treat as uncountable: 'I like advertising with creative ideas.' Suggestion: 'I like advertisements that have creative ideas.'

× I appreciate that a lot because nowadays it's very hard to come with a new ideas because everything has been overused.

✓ I appreciate that a lot because nowadays it's very hard to come up with new ideas; everything has been overused.

Use 'come up with' rather than 'come with'. 'a new ideas' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'new ideas' or 'a new idea'. 'Everything has been overused' is fine. Suggestion: '...it's very hard to come up with new ideas.'

× So to come up with a creative one is something that I really, really appreciate.

✓ So coming up with a creative one is something that I really, really appreciate.

Use of infinitive 'to come up' is grammatical, but gerund 'coming up' sounds more natural after 'So'. Tense is present and expresses general preference, so present form is appropriate. Suggestion: 'So coming up with a creative one is something I really appreciate.'

× Yes, they are everywhere on the Internet.

✓ Yes, they are everywhere on the Internet.

This sentence is actually correct; keep 'the Internet' with 'the'. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× Whatever website you visit, there are a lot of ads in there because many people earn some money for showing these ads.

✓ Whatever website you visit, there are a lot of ads there because many people earn money by showing these ads.

Use 'there' instead of 'in there' for formality. 'Earn some money' is informal; 'earn money' is better. Use 'by showing' to indicate means. Suggestion: '...there are a lot of ads there because many people earn money by showing these ads.'

× So it's widely used on the phone and on the computer and every website, and it can be just a banner or videos.

✓ So it's widely used on phones and computers and on every website, and it can be just a banner or a video.

Quantifiers and count nouns: use plural 'phones' and 'computers'. 'Every website' is fine with 'on'. 'videos' should match singular 'a banner' or be plural 'videos'; use parallel structure 'a banner or a video' or 'banners or videos'. Suggestion: '...on phones and computers and on every website, and it can be just a banner or a video.'