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Sugestão: 在回答中要用完整句子直接回应问题，并增加具体细节和连接词以显得更自然流畅。可以先概述印象深刻的广告，再用原因和细节支持，比如描述广告的場景、情感和你当时的反应。避免句子碎片化，最长不超五句。

Exemplo: Yes. A shampoo commercial impressed me when I was a child because it showed a girl with long, beautiful black hair. I remember bright lighting and soft music that made her hair look shiny and smooth, which made me jealous. That ad stuck in my mind because it suggested the product could completely change your appearance.

Sugestão: 回答需更清晰、用词准确并用连词组织信息。指出常见位置时要用正确短语（例如 "back of the seat"、"inside trains"），并给出一两个具体例子或频率说明，使内容更具体。避免拼写和语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport. For example, there are posters on the back of seats in buses and trains, and short video ads on airplane entertainment screens. These ads are very visible during my commute.

Sugestão: 需要用更自然的表达并补充原因和例子。用连接词如 'because' 来解释反感的原因，注意时态和语法（如 'make it hard to ignore'）。可以提到广告打扰的具体场景，保持不超过五句。

Exemplo: Actually, I don't like advertisements because they often interrupt what I'm doing and are too loud. For instance, video ads on websites usually start suddenly and make it hard to concentrate. Because of that, I often try to skip or block them.

Sugestão: 回答总体不错，有个人喜好和理由，但需用更简洁自然的结构并修正表达错误。说明具体类型（比如 Thai commercials）并给出原因与例子，用连接词如 'for example' 强化逻辑。保持不超过五句。

Exemplo: I enjoy creative Thai commercials because they often start like a touching love story but suddenly reveal a product, such as tissues. For example, one ad made me emotional until I realized it was promoting a tissue brand, which felt clever and memorable.

Sugestão: 提高自然度和准确性，修正语法（如 'see ads' 、'have to watch'），并补充频率与影响的具体例子。可用连接词 'for example' 或 'because' 来组织句子，使回答连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see ads when I use my phone or computer, especially in free apps. Usually short video ads pop up and I have to watch them for two or three seconds before I can close them, which is annoying because they interrupt my browsing.

× Made an impression on me.

✓ It made an impression on me.

这是句子缺主语和谓语的完整结构。原句为不完整的短语，面试中需要完整句子。建议在前面加上主语及助动词或实义动词：It made an impression on me（它给我留下了印象）。

× The girl had a long beautiful black hair.

✓ The girl had long beautiful black hair.

中文说明：hair 在表示头发整体时为不可数名词，不用加不定冠词或复数形式。原句中加了不必要的冠词和单复数形式，应改为 long beautiful black hair。

× Made me very jealous.

✓ It made me very jealous.

中文说明：同上，句子缺主语，属于不完整句。需要在前面加主语 It 或者 The advertisement/The girl。建议：It made me very jealous。

× Yes, of course there were many advertisements on back of the chair on trees and a pad or TV on plane.

✓ Yes, of course there were many advertisements on the back of the seats, on trees, and on the screens or TVs on planes.

中文说明：存在 there be 结构使用以及介词和冠词错误。需要用 the back of the seats（座位后面），并用并列结构清晰分开不同位置。plane 前需加复数或冠词并改为 on planes 或 on the plane 的 screens。建议使用复数形式或指定冠词使句子更自然。

× Actually I don't like them, I think advertisements really bother me and they are too loud, made me can't ignore them.

✓ Actually I don't like them. I think advertisements really bother me and they are too loud; they make me unable to ignore them.

中文说明：句子中时态混乱与结构不完整。'made me can't ignore them' 是不正确的时态和语序，应使用现在时使役结构：they make me unable to ignore them，或者 they make it hard for me to ignore them。建议使用完整句并保持时态一致。

× I'm a huge fan of Thai as You thinking you're watching a touching love story and then suddenly it turns out they're selling tissues.

✓ I'm a huge fan of Thai ads. You think you're watching a touching love story and then suddenly it turns out they're selling tissues.

中文说明：原句语序和句子边界混乱，应将两个想法分成两句，同时补全名词 ads。建议先说主句 I'm a huge fan of Thai ads，然后再说明原因：You think...。

× Yes, I'm often sure ads when I use apps.

✓ Yes, I often see ads when I use apps.

中文说明：原句中 sure 是错误动词，应该使用 see（看到）。此外副词位置也需调整为 often 放在动词前：I often see ads。建议注意动词选择和副词位置。

× Usually short video ads that pop up and have to watch for two or three seconds before I can get them.

✓ Usually short video ads pop up and I have to watch them for two or three seconds before I can skip them.

中文说明：原句缺少谓语，且代词与动词搭配错误（have to watch for... need object，get them 不明确）。改为完整句并补上代词 them 和适当动词 skip。建议保持主语和谓语完整并提供宾语。

× They'll be quite annoying because they interrupt me.

✓ They are quite annoying because they interrupt me.

中文说明：使用将来时 will be 与上下文不符，陈述习惯性事实应使用一般现在时：They are quite annoying。建议在描述经常发生的情况时使用一般现在时。