Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は具体性と自然さを高める必要があります。まず冒頭で直接質問に答え（例：Yes, food adverts impressed me.）、次に理由を明確にし、具体例を一つ挙げてください。また不自然な語句（VCMSなど）を避け、簡潔にまとめて5文以内にします。接続語（for example, because, so）を使って論理を明確にしてください。発音で意味が伝わりにくい語は練習し、語彙は関連語（catchy jingles, memorable characters）を使いましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, food advertisements impressed me when I was a child because they used catchy jingles and colorful characters. For example, a cereal ad had a friendly mascot and a short song that I still remember. Because of that, I often asked my parents to buy those products. Overall, those adverts made the food seem fun and memorable.

Sugestão: 回答は概ね理解できるが、構成と具体性が不十分です。まず簡潔に答え（Yes, I do）、次に理由と具体例を続けてください。文の途中で切れるのを避け、接続詞（so, therefore, recently）でつなげて論理的に述べます。語彙はtransport advertising, posters, digital screensなどを使い、文は4文以内に収めてください。発音と文法（I watch → I see/ I notice）にも注意しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on trains because I usually avoid using my smartphone during the journey. As a result, I often look at posters and digital screens on the walls. Recently, I noticed several movie ads on the train that were very eye-catching. They usually use bold images and short taglines to attract attention.

Sugestão: 回答は明確だが表現が不自然で冗長です。冒頭で簡潔に答え、次に具体的な理由を2つまで示してください（information about new products / shared cultural references）。接続語（because, and, for example）で文章をつなぎ、語法（be familiar to my generation → be familiar to people my age）を正しく使ってください。例や短い結果（we talk about them）を加えると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Advertisements help me learn about new and useful products, and some ads reflect trends that people my age understand. For example, a popular advert can become something my friends and I talk about at school. That shared reference makes adverts a good conversation starter.

Sugestão: 回答が断片的で文法的に不完全です。まず好きな広告の種類を明確に述べ（I prefer social media ads）、次に理由を述べ、具体的な特徴（bright visuals, short videos, clear messages）を挙げてください。接続語（because, and, for example）で論理的に説明し、文を完結させましょう。語彙はsocial media advertising, visuals, video adsなどを使って自然に表現してください。

Exemplo: I prefer social media advertising because it is widely used and often tailored to my interests. These ads usually have bright visuals and short videos that explain the product clearly. For example, a short demo video on Instagram helped me decide to try a new app. Overall, I like ads that show how a product works quickly.

Sugestão: この回答は意味が不明瞭で文法ミスが多く、論点がはっきりしません。まず明確に答え（Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer.）、次に頻度と影響（they are more frequent and sometimes interrupt my browsing）を具体的に述べてください。最後に自分の意見（but sometimes they are useful）を入れると良いです。接続語（however, although, because）を使い、不要な表現を削り、語彙（pop-ups, banner ads, targeted ads）を正しく使ってください。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer. They have become more frequent recently and sometimes interrupt my browsing with pop-ups or video ads. However, some targeted ads are useful because they introduce products I might like. Overall, I find online ads annoying but occasionally helpful.

× Yes, especially food advertisement was really impressive because it contained some VCMS and phrases to be well known the food.

✓ Yes, especially food advertisements were really impressive because they used catchphrases and slogans to make the food well known.

The original sentence has adjective/adverb and agreement issues. 'food advertisement' should be plural 'food advertisements' to match general statement, and verb agreement requires 'were'. 'VCMS' is unclear; 'catchphrases and slogans' is a clearer choice. 'to be well known the food' has incorrect word order and article use; correct phrasing is 'to make the food well known'. Improve by using plural nouns for general references, matching verb number, and correct word order for purpose expressions.

× Yes, I watch a lot of advertisements on train because I don't use my smartphone on the trains, so I usually look for interesting advertisements. Recently there are some movies on the wall, so it's.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on trains because I don't use my smartphone on them, so I usually look for interesting ads. Recently there have been some videos on the walls.

Preposition and article use are incorrect. Use 'on trains' (general) and 'on them' to refer to trains. 'Watch' is awkward for seeing ads in public; 'see' is better. 'Advertisements' can be shortened to 'ads'. 'Movies on the wall' should be 'videos on the walls' or 'video screens on the walls', and use present perfect 'have been' for recent occurrences. Improve by choosing correct prepositions, plural forms for general statements, and appropriate verbs for context.

× Yes, because I can know some better goods by advertisements, and sometimes advertisements are familiar with my generation, so it's the common topic with my friends.

✓ Yes, because I can learn about better products from advertisements, and sometimes ads are familiar to my generation, so they are a common topic with my friends.

The phrase 'can know some better goods' is unnatural; use 'can learn about better products'. 'Familiar with my generation' is incorrect preposition use and passive sense; correct is 'familiar to my generation'. 'It's the common topic' should match plural subject 'ads' so 'they are a common topic'. Improve by using natural collocations ('learn about', 'products'), correct prepositions ('familiar to'), and subject-verb agreement.

× Make social network services advertisements because they are used. Bright visuals and movies as well so I can understand the.

✓ I like advertisements for social networking services because they are widely used. They often have bright visuals and videos, which makes them easy to understand.

Original has incomplete sentence fragments and unclear structure. 'Make social network services advertisements because they are used' lacks a subject and clarity. Rephrase to 'I like advertisements for social networking services because they are widely used.' 'Bright visuals and movies as well so I can understand the.' is unfinished; complete it with 'They often have bright visuals and videos, which makes them easy to understand.' Improve by forming complete sentences, adding subjects, and using clear connectors.

× Yes, these are ladies. Advertisements are increased and sometimes it interrupt my interest to watch the websites, but the total I guess it's so better to watch more.

✓ Yes, there are many of them. Advertisements have increased and sometimes they interrupt my interest when I browse websites, but overall I think it's better to watch more carefully.

The phrase 'these are ladies' is unclear and uses wrong pronoun reference; likely intended 'there are many' or 'there are many ads'. 'Advertisements are increased' is incorrect passive; use 'advertisements have increased'. 'it interrupt' needs subject-verb agreement: 'they interrupt'. 'to watch the websites' should be 'when I browse websites'. 'the total I guess it's so better to watch more' is ungrammatical; revise to 'overall I think it's better to watch more carefully.' Improve by using correct pronouns, correct tense/aspect, subject-verb agreement, and natural collocations.