Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答需更自然、语法更正确并更简洁。开头直接回应问题，使用正确时态和代词（saw, an advertisement about candy），避免重复（不要多次说“attract me”）。可以加一两句具体细节说明为什么印象深刻（比如广告的颜色、音乐或角色），并用连接词使句子连贯。保持不超过5句。

Exemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I saw a TV commercial for a colorful candy brand that really impressed me. The ad used bright colors and a catchy jingle, which made the candy look irresistible. Because of that, I remember wanting to try it every time I saw the commercial.

Sugestão: 回答直接且基本正确，但可以更自然地组织语言并补充一两条具体例子说明频率或类型（海报、屏幕广告等）。使用连接词如“not only…but also”和必要的冠词（the subway, bus stations）。控制在最多5句内。

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport. Not only are there posters on trains, but there are also digital screens and billboards in the subway, bus stations, and airports. These ads often promote local services or new products.

Sugestão: 表达应更自然并用更恰当词汇替换“not disgusted”。可以直接说“I don't mind advertisements”或“I find them useful”，并给出具体原因或例子（例如获取折扣信息或新产品信息）。语言应简洁流畅，避免重复和填充词。

Exemplo: I don't mind advertisements because they help me discover new products and special offers. For example, I often learn about sales or useful apps through short ads online.

Sugestão: 表达要更自然并修正语法（注意数和冠词：food advertisements, catch my attention）。可以说明具体原因（视觉效果、taste descriptions），并举例说明会如何受影响。控制在不超过5句。

Exemplo: I prefer food advertisements because they catch my attention with vivid images and mouth-watering descriptions. For example, a commercial showing a crispy snack or a delicious meal often makes me want to try it.

Sugestão: 句子需要更自然并修正语序及词汇（on apps like TikTok, Xiaohongshu or Taobao）。可以补充广告形式（short videos, banners）和频率，例如每天或经常看到。保持简洁并用连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on apps like TikTok, Xiaohongshu, and Taobao. Most of the ads appear as short videos or banner ads while I scroll, and I see them several times a day.

× Yes, when I was a child, I see AI see an advertisement about the candy and it attracts me, attract me a lot that I really want to eat it.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I saw an advertisement about a candy and it attracted me a lot; I really wanted to eat it.

句子描述的是过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时（saw, attracted, wanted）。原句中大量使用现在时和重复短语（see AI see、attract me, attract me）导致时态不一致和冗余。建议把动词改为过去式，并删除重复或多余成分，使表达简洁明了。

× Of course, not only on trains, but also in the subway, bus station or airport.

✓ Of course, not only on trains, but also in the subway, at bus stations, or at airports.

在英语中表示位于某处常用介词 at（用于车站、机场等）或 in（用于较大的封闭空间如 subway）。要注意复数形式（bus stations, airports）以表示一般情况。原句中混用单复数和介词不当，建议使用规范介词并统一复数。

× I am not disgusted with advertisement because I can see the advertisement and think what thing, what things I can buy or uh useful for me.

✓ I am not put off by advertisements because I can see them and think about what I can buy or what is useful for me.

原句中 article/quantifier 使用不当：advertisement 单数不适合泛指，多数应使用复数 advertisements 或代词 them。且短语 think what thing, what things 不自然，应改为 think about what I can buy。建议使用复数形式或代词，并用自然表达取代直译。

× I prefer some food advertisement because they catch me attention and are more memorable. And I will choose, uh, choose some snack to buy.

✓ I prefer food advertisements because they catch my attention and are more memorable, so I often choose a snack to buy.

原句中 advertisement 单/复数混用，应为复数 advertisements；短语 catch me attention 不正确，正确为 catch my attention（所有格）。此外语序和连贯性需要调整，使用 so 或 therefore 连接因果关系。建议使用所有格 my，注意名词复数和流畅衔接。

× I often see advertisements on my like some application like a Tiktok, Redbook or Taobao.

✓ I often see advertisements on apps I use, like TikTok, Redbook, or Taobao.

原句中结构杂乱（on my like some application like a...），应简化为 on apps I use 或 on my apps。注意品牌名拼写（TikTok）和并列时使用逗号及 or。建议把表达整理为常见搭配：on apps I use, like ...。