Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子表达有意义，但语法和连贯性问题较多，信息不够具体。建议：1) 开头直接回应并给出更清晰的主题句，例如说明是何种公益广告；2) 用一到两句补充具体细节（例如广告内容、画面或情感影响）并使用连接词（for example, because）来增强连贯性；3) 注意主谓一致和词汇搭配（e.g. "the advertisement showed"，"it said 'I love you'"）。

Exemplo: Yes. A public service advertisement about family values impressed me when I was a child. It showed parents and children forming the words "I love you" with their hands, and a gentle voiceover explained the importance of expressing love. Because of its touching music and simple visuals, I still remember the message clearly.

Sugestão: 回答直接但有语法和表达重复问题，细节不够精确。建议：1) 首句明确回答并用简洁主题句；2) 用连接词（such as, for example）列举具体位置和类型（seat backs, digital screens）；3) 提供一到两条具体观察或频率描述，避免冗余。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often notice advertisements on trains, such as posters on the back of seats and digital screens above the doors. For example, I usually see travel promotions and local event ads during my commute.

Sugestão: 表达有观点但语法错误多且最后句不完整，逻辑不够清晰。建议：1) 以明确的主题句开始（Yes/No and reason）；2) 用对比连接词（however, but）清晰表达喜欢和不喜欢的类型；3) 修正模糊或不完整的句子，给出具体例子（e.g. loud ads with aggressive sales tactics）。

Exemplo: It depends on the advertisement. I like ads that are funny or emotionally touching because they feel genuine, but I dislike loud or aggressive ads that use exaggerated claims or shouting, as they annoy me.

Sugestão: 回答意图明确但句子结构混乱且有拼写/搭配错误。建议：1) 用一到两句简洁地说明喜欢的广告类型；2) 用连接词（because, as a result）说明原因并提供具体例子或效果；3) 注意动词时态和名词搭配（e.g. "tell touching stories", "create a strong emotional connection"）。

Exemplo: I prefer advertisements that tell touching stories because they create a strong emotional connection and often highlight important social issues. As a result, these ads leave a lasting impression and make me view the brand more positively.

Sugestão: 回答总体明确，但有用词错误和未完成的句子（最后一句断了）。建议：1) 开头用一句完整的主题句说明频率；2) 用连词举例具体平台（for example）并说明类型（banner, video, sponsored posts）；3) 完成关于个性化广告的陈述，说明依据（browsing history, interests）。

Exemplo: Yes, very often. Almost every time I use my phone or computer I see ads on social media, websites and in apps, such as banner ads and short videos. I've also noticed that many of these ads are personalized based on my browsing history and interests.

× Yes, there was a public service advertisement that tells the families is composed of the initial letters from the phrase father and mother. I love you.

✓ Yes, there was a public service advertisement that said families are composed of the initial letters from the phrase 'father and mother: I love you.'

该句使用了时态和结构混合问题。原句开头用过去时"was"，随后用现在时"tells"，且"the families is composed"主谓不一致（复数名词families却用单数is）。建议：将后半句改为过去式或用过去分词"said"与前半句保持时态一致；把谓语改为复数形式"are"以与复数主语一致；并用引号或冒号清晰引出短语。简洁改法如："there was a public service advertisement that said ..."。

× Yes, I pay a lot of attention of those ads on trains because I really don't have much else to do on trains.

✓ Yes, I pay a lot of attention to those ads on trains because I really don't have much else to do while on trains.

短语固定搭配是"pay attention to"，不能用"pay attention of"。此外句尾重复"on trains"显累赘，用"while on trains"更自然。建议记住固定搭配并避免不必要的重复。

× I noticed there are ads on the back of the seats also on digital screens there are many including travel designations and some.

✓ I noticed there are ads on the back of the seats and many on digital screens, including travel advertisements and others.

原句缺乏连词和标点，导致信息堆砌且语序混乱。"also on digital screens there are many"应与前半句通过并列连词连接，并把列举的内容放在短语末尾修饰。建议使用连词（and）和逗号来分隔并列信息，改为更清晰的结构。

× Is depends on the advertisement.

✓ It depends on the advertisement.

主语缺失且动词形式错误。正确结构为主语+动词，常用短语为"It depends on..."。原句把主语"It"省略并误把动词"depends"前加"Is"。建议完整说出主语"It"。

× I dislike as that talking loudly with just totally rubs the wrong way, so it really.

✓ I dislike ads that talk loudly and just totally rub me the wrong way.

原句中"as"应为"ads"；"talking loudly"需要与前面的名词"ads"连用（ads that talk）；"rub the wrong way"需要具体宾语（如"me"），且句子结尾"so it really"不完整。建议改为完整的主谓宾结构并补上宾语。

× I like as that tell a touching story as they created a strong information connecting this as often highlight important social issues or values, leaving a lasting impression and making me think positively about the brand.

✓ I like ads that tell a touching story because they create a strong emotional connection, often highlight important social issues or values, leave a lasting impression, and make me think positively about the brand.

原句中多处错误："as"应为"ads"；时态不一致（应使用一般现在时描述习惯性喜好）；"information connecting"不自然，改为"emotional connection"更贴切；从句连接词应使用"because"或"as"的一处而不是重复使用。建议用清晰的并列动词形式并统一时态。

× Yes, of course, the fluency is very often.

✓ Yes, of course, they appear very often.

原句"the fluency is very often"语义和搭配错误："fluency"与上下文无关且搭配不当。说看到广告很频繁应使用主语"they"或"ads"并用短语"appear very often"或"occur very often"。建议使用与广告相关的词汇并调整时态与搭配。

× Almost every time I use my phone or computer. I see it on social media, websites and even in apps.

✓ Almost every time I use my phone or computer, I see them on social media, websites and even in apps.

原来两句分割不当，第一句为不完整句（缺谓语）。同时代词"it"应指代"ads"，复数应使用"them"。建议将句子合并为完整句并使用正确代词。

× I've noticed that many of these ads are personalized based on my.

✓ I've noticed that many of these ads are personalized based on my interests.

原句以介词"based on"结尾，缺少宾语，导致句子不完整。需要补上被基于的对象，如"my interests"或"my browsing history"。建议补全介词短语的宾语以完整表达意思。