Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one specific example with a brief description and a reason why it impressed you. Use correct tense and singular/plural forms, and avoid repetition. Add a linking phrase to connect the example and the reason.

Exemplo: Yes. One advertisement that impressed me as a child showed a family enjoying dinner together. Because it focused on warmth and simple moments, it felt emotional and memorable to me.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use present tense for habitual actions. Give a brief reason and a specific example. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'sometimes' correctly, and fix word forms (advertise → advertisements). Keep sentences short and coherent.

Exemplo: Not really. I usually avoid looking at adverts, but sometimes when I travel by subway and don't want to use my phone, I notice the posters on the walls.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and follow with specific reasons or an example. Avoid fragments; combine ideas with linking words like 'but' or 'however.' Clarify unclear phrases (e.g., 'attachment was trying to make me'). Use vocabulary relevant to ads (persuasive, informative, creative).

Exemplo: It depends. I like advertisements that are creative or meaningful because they tell a story, but I dislike intrusive ads that try too hard to persuade me to buy something.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the type of advertising, then explain why with one or two specific reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid double negatives. Use linking words like 'because' to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: I prefer meaningful advertisements because they focus on emotions or useful information rather than pressuring people to buy things. For example, charity campaigns that tell real stories often stand out to me.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear habit statement in present simple. Explain why ads are annoying with a specific example (e.g., pop-ups interrupt videos). Use correct vocabulary (ads, interrupt) and avoid tense confusion. Keep it to two or three sentences max.

Exemplo: Not often—I dislike ads on my phone or computer because they interrupt videos or articles. For example, pop-up ads often appear while I'm watching a show online, which is very annoying.

× Yes Sir, when I was a child, there are many advertisements leave me an impression.

✓ Yes Sir, when I was a child, there were many advertisements that left an impression on me.

The original mixes plural/plural agreement and incorrect verb forms. 'There are' should be past 'there were' to match 'when I was a child' (past tense). 'Leave me an impression' is wrong order and tense; use 'left an impression on me.' Also add 'that' to introduce the relative clause. Suggestion: Use past tense for situations in the past and use 'left an impression on me' for the correct verb phrase.

× For example, I remembered a an advertisement illustrate the family.

✓ For example, I remember an advertisement that illustrated a family.

Errors: double article 'a an', incorrect verb tense and form, and missing relative pronoun. Use 'I remember' (present recollection) or 'I remembered' if narrating; here 'I remember' is clearer. 'An advertisement that illustrated a family' uses 'an' before 'advertisement' and 'that illustrated' for correct clause. Suggestion: Remove duplicate articles and use 'that' to connect clause; match tense consistently.

× It means a lot.

✓ It meant a lot.

Context refers to a childhood memory, so past tense 'meant' is appropriate. Using present 'means' is acceptable if stating current meaning, but to be consistent with past narrative use past tense. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent within the anecdote.

× No, I don't like to watch advertise honestly, but sometimes when I was in subway so I don't want to check my phone so that time I would look at advertise.

✓ No, I don't like to watch advertisements honestly, but sometimes when I am on the subway and don't want to check my phone, I look at advertisements.

Multiple issues: 'advertise' is a verb not a noun; use 'advertisements.' Tense inconsistency: 'when I was in subway' should be 'when I am on the subway' or past consistently. 'So that time I would look at advertise' is awkward; use 'I look at advertisements.' Also add article 'the' before 'subway.' Suggestion: Use correct noun form 'advertisements,' include 'the' with public transport ('the subway'), and keep present tense when speaking about habitual actions.

× Well, it's hard to say. When I see a meaningful and beautiful advertisement, I would like it, but sometimes. I don't like it. For example attachment was trying to make make me.

✓ Well, it's hard to say. When I see a meaningful and beautiful advertisement, I like it, but sometimes I don't. For example, some ads try to manipulate me.

Problems: fragmented sentence 'but sometimes.' Repeated word 'make make.' 'Attachment' is wrong word; likely 'ads' or 'some advertisements.' Use present simple 'I like' for habitual reaction. 'Try to manipulate me' is clearer than 'trying to make me.' Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments, remove duplicate words, and choose correct nouns ('ads' or 'advertisements') and verbs ('try to manipulate').

× Well, I like these meaningful and don't all do not always trying to persuade me to buy something that will make me makes me feel uncomfortable, so I like.

✓ Well, I like meaningful advertisements that do not always try to persuade me to buy something and make me feel uncomfortable.

Pronoun and structure errors: 'these meaningful' lacks noun; contradictory negatives 'don't all do not always.' 'Make me makes me' duplicates verb and wrong form. Use 'advertisements' as noun, 'that do not always try' for the relative clause, and 'make me feel uncomfortable' for correct verb phrase. Suggestion: Use a clear noun after demonstratives ('these advertisements'), avoid double negatives, and ensure verbs are not duplicated.

× No, when I play with my phone or or computer, I actually I hate these ads because I was watching TV dramas or I was watching novels.

✓ No, when I use my phone or computer, I actually hate these ads because they interrupt me when I'm watching TV dramas or reading novels.

Issues: 'play with my phone or or computer' duplicate 'or', wrong verb 'play' for device use. Tense mismatch 'I was watching' vs present habitual; use present continuous 'I'm watching' or present simple for habits. 'Watching novels' is incorrect; 'reading novels' is correct. Also explain cause: 'they interrupt me.' Suggestion: Use 'use' for devices, correct activity verbs (read novels), and match tense for habitual complaints.

× These eyes always interrupt me so it's annoying.

✓ These ads always interrupt me, so it's annoying.

Typo: 'eyes' should be 'ads.' 'Always' placement is acceptable but ensure noun is correct. Add comma before conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Proofread for typos and ensure ad placement is natural ('always interrupt me').