Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and incorrect verb forms. Also use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “campaign” instead of “advertisement who”).

Exemplo: A clear answer: “Yes. A public-service campaign featuring the cartoon characters Meena and Raju impressed me as a child. The campaign promoted girls’ education and discouraged early marriage, using simple stories to show why school is important. Because it used familiar characters, the message stuck with many families.”

Sugestão: Organize the answer: give a direct yes/no, then explain with coherent reasons and a specific example. Use linking words like “for example” and correct word order. Avoid repetition and fix articles and plural forms.

Exemplo: A clear answer: “Yes, I see many ads on trains and other public transport. This is because transit reaches a large audience. For example, last week at the metro station I noticed a Grameen Foam poster promoting mattresses; it was placed near the ticket gates where many commuters could see it.”

Sugestão: Make your opinion clear and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct tense and collocations (e.g., “I like educational advertisements” and “I learn new words”). Keep sentences concise and avoid awkward phrases like “enthusiasm knowledge.”

Exemplo: A clear answer: “Yes, I like advertisements, especially educational ones. They help me discover English courses, podcasts and magazines. For example, I subscribed to an English learning podcast after seeing its ad, and it has helped me learn useful vocabulary.”

Sugestão: Answer directly: name the type you like, then explain why with a clear example. Use linking words (because, for example) and complete your sentences. Avoid trailing off and filler words.

Exemplo: A clear answer: “I prefer educational advertisements, especially those for language learning. They are useful because they point me to resources that improve my skills. For example, I recently found the ‘English Language Club’ podcast through an ad, and it taught me new listening techniques.”

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer, then explain frequency and types with clear grammar. Use specific examples (apps or sites) and avoid filler words. Use linking phrases like “often,” “for example,” and correct prepositions (“on my phone”).

Exemplo: A clear answer: “Yes, I often see ads when I use my phone or computer, especially on social media. For example, while scrolling Instagram or Facebook I regularly encounter ads for electronics, apps and public campaigns. These ads appear as banners or short videos between posts.”

× At my childhood, I saw one advertisement who actually impressed me.

✓ In my childhood, I saw an advertisement that actually impressed me.

Use 'in my childhood' not 'at my childhood'. Use 'an' before a vowel sound. Use 'that' (or 'which') for things, not 'who' which is for people. Replace 'one advertisement' with 'an advertisement' for natural English.

× The one advertisement actually is generally a cartoon, uh, which is Meena and Raju.

✓ The advertisement was a cartoon called Meena and Raju.

Avoid 'one' and unnecessary adverbs like 'actually' and 'generally'. Use past tense 'was' to match 'saw'. Use 'called' to name the cartoon rather than 'which is'.

× But uh, behind this, uh, cartoon, they informed they enhance their tagline in public, which is, uh, stop early marriage and children should go fulfill their education is the main theme of.

✓ But behind this cartoon there was a public campaign with the tagline 'stop early marriage; children should complete their education', which was its main theme.

Original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. Use a clear subject and verb order: 'there was a public campaign'. Present the tagline in quotes and use parallel structure 'stop early marriage; children should complete their education'. Use 'complete' rather than 'fulfill' for education.

× Yes, I saw a lot of advertisement trains and other transport such as metros, buses and public any transportation because they think is the easy way to reach the news for public because for example in recently I reach I go use metro station.

✓ Yes, I saw a lot of advertisements on trains and other transport such as metros, buses and public transport because they think it is an easy way to reach the public; for example, recently when I went to the metro station I saw an advertisement for Grameen Foam.

Use 'on trains' not 'advertisement trains'. Use plural 'advertisements'. Use 'public transport' or 'public transportation'. Fix 'they think it is' and 'reach the public'. Use past tense 'went' for recent action. Clarify 'Grameen Foam advertisement' and place it correctly in the sentence.

× I saw the Grameen foam advertisement see actually easy way to reach the pub.

✓ I saw the Grameen Foam advertisement; it is actually an easy way to reach the public.

Capitalize brand names. Use 'advertisement' singular here is acceptable but 'public' should be 'public' as noun; add 'the' or use 'public' contextually. Rearranged to form a correct clause and corrected 'pub' to 'public'.

× Yeah, I really like advertisement.

✓ Yes, I really like advertisements.

Use 'advertisements' plural when speaking generally. 'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' is preferable in test context.

× We actually related educational and something is together.

✓ I prefer advertisements that are related to education and learning materials.

Original lacks clear quantifier and structure. Use 'prefer advertisements that are related to education' to express preference and correct collocation 'related to'.

× I knowledge.

✓ I gain knowledge from them.

Single word 'I knowledge' is ungrammatical. Use a verb: 'I gain knowledge' or 'They give me knowledge'.

× For example, recently I started to saw advertisement which is related for our education purpose, such as English advertising and other magazine and podcasts.

✓ For example, recently I started to see advertisements related to education, such as English language ads, magazines, and podcasts.

Use 'started to see' (base verb), not 'started to saw' (past). Use plural 'advertisements' and correct preposition 'related to'. Use 'English language ads' and plural 'magazines'.

× So actually it's very beneficial to me.

✓ So they are actually very beneficial to me.

Clarify the subject 'they' (advertisements) and agree verb plurality 'are'. Keep 'actually' as adverb but place appropriately.

× I learned a lot of words and enthusiasm knowledge.

✓ I learned a lot of words and gained enthusiasm and knowledge.

'Enthusiasm knowledge' is not a valid phrase. Separate into 'enthusiasm' and 'knowledge' or use 'gained enthusiasm and knowledge'.

× Well, the education and the special content, which is related to my academic purpose.

✓ Well, educational and specialized content that is related to my academic goals.

Use adjectives 'educational' and 'specialized' instead of nouns. Use 'goals' rather than 'purpose' for natural collocation. Remove unnecessary commas.

× Actually, I see this kind of advertisement regularly.

✓ Actually, I see this kind of advertisement regularly.

Sentence is acceptable; tense 'see' can be used for habitual action. No correction needed; keep as is.

× Uh, for example, recently I started seeing the podcast English language club and so many more because I learned a lot of things from here.

✓ For example, recently I started listening to the podcast 'English Language Club' and many others because I learned a lot from them.

Use 'listening to' for podcasts. Capitalize podcast name and put it in quotes. Use 'them' to refer to podcasts and 'learned a lot from them'.

× Uh, this advertisement interested me a lot and I.

✓ This advertisement interested me a lot.

Sentence was incomplete. Remove the trailing 'and I' or complete the thought (e.g., 'and I started following it'). Ensure sentences are complete with subject and predicate.

× Yeah, actually when I use in social media that time suddenly I saw a lot of advertisement throw any, uh, throw any somethings which is electronics and other umm society public issues.

✓ Yes, actually when I use social media I suddenly see a lot of advertisements for electronics and public-social issues.

Do not use 'use in social media'; say 'use social media'. Use present tense 'see' for habitual actions. Use 'advertisements for' rather than 'advertisement throw'. Simplify 'society public issues' to 'public-social issues' or 'social issues'.

× Actually I always try to use uh, social media at my phone.

✓ I always use social media on my phone.

Use 'on my phone' not 'at my phone'. 'Try to use' implies effort; if habitual, say 'I always use'.

× So when I saw advertisement, I it is easy way to phone.

✓ So when I see advertisements, it is an easy way to access information on my phone.

Correct tense to present for habitual action: 'when I see'. Fix pronoun and structure: 'it is an easy way to access information on my phone' clarifies meaning.