Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. For instance, instead of repeating 'honestly' and 'I think', say directly what you remember and why.

Exemplo: I don't recall any advertisement that left a strong impression on me as a child because I was more focused on watching the shows themselves rather than the ads.

Sugestão: Improve clarity and grammar by using correct sentence structures and avoiding double negatives. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your opinion clearly.

Exemplo: I don't often notice advertisements on cars or public transport because they don't really catch my attention; watching ads is not really my cup of tea.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and concise by avoiding repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Exemplo: I don't dislike advertisements, but I prefer watching shows without interruptions because ads break the flow, so I usually lose interest in them.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases. Provide more specific examples and explain why you like those types of advertisements to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: I enjoy advertisements about healthy eating and lifestyle products because they provide useful information that can improve my daily habits.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and avoid repetition to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I don't often pay attention to advertisements on my phone or computer because I usually skip them since they interrupt the flow of the show or movie I'm watching.

× Honestly telling, I cannot able to remember any advertisement which made a an impact in my life when I was a child.

✓ Honestly speaking, I cannot remember any advertisement which made an impact in my life when I was a child.

The phrase 'cannot able to' is incorrect because 'cannot' already expresses inability, so 'able to' is redundant. The correct modal verb usage is 'cannot remember'. Also, 'Honestly telling' is not idiomatic; 'Honestly speaking' is the correct expression.

× Honestly telling, I cannot able to remember any advertisement which made a an impact in my life when I was a child.

✓ Honestly speaking, I cannot remember any advertisement which made an impact in my life when I was a child.

There is a repeated article 'a an' before 'impact'. Only one article 'an' is needed before a vowel sound. The correct phrase is 'an impact'.

× I was more interested in watching the shows rather than watching the advertisements.

✓ I was more interested in watching shows rather than watching advertisements.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before plural nouns when speaking generally. Removing 'the' before 'shows' and 'advertisements' makes the sentence more natural.

× So I honestly think it doesn't make me any impression.

✓ So I honestly think it doesn't make any impression on me.

The phrase 'make me any impression' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'make any impression on me'. Also, 'doesn't make' is correct modal verb usage here.

× No, I don't watch much advertisement on the car and on all all the other public transports.

✓ No, I don't watch much advertisement on the car and on all the other public transport.

The word 'advertisement' should be uncountable or plural depending on context; 'much advertisement' is acceptable if uncountable, but 'advertisements' is more common. Also, 'public transports' is incorrect; 'public transport' is an uncountable noun. The repeated word 'all' is a typo and should be removed.

× It doesn't make me any fascinated to watch advertisement Doesn't really not my cup of tea.

✓ It doesn't make me fascinated to watch advertisements. It really is not my cup of tea.

The phrase 'make me any fascinated' is incorrect; 'make me fascinated' is correct. Also, 'Doesn't really not my cup of tea' is ungrammatical; it should be 'It really is not my cup of tea.' Additionally, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when speaking generally.

× Honestly telling, I don't have any issues with advertisement but I am not a fan of watching advertisement.

✓ Honestly speaking, I don't have any issues with advertisements but I am not a fan of watching advertisements.

'Honestly telling' is incorrect; 'Honestly speaking' is the correct phrase. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when speaking generally.

× I'm not that's why I don't have much interest in watching advertisement.

✓ I'm not; that's why I don't have much interest in watching advertisements.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunction or punctuation. Adding a semicolon or conjunction clarifies the meaning. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'.

× I like advertisements like uh, the healthy eating foods advertisement and also about the promotions which people show about different lifestyle equipments.

✓ I like advertisements like, uh, healthy eating food advertisements and also promotions about different lifestyle equipment.

'The healthy eating foods advertisement' is awkward; removing 'the' and pluralizing 'advertisement' to 'advertisements' is better. 'Foods' should be singular 'food' as an adjective. 'Lifestyle equipments' is incorrect; 'equipment' is uncountable and should not be pluralized.

× So I, I like that advertisement like that, but I am not much into advertisement.

✓ So, I like advertisements like that, but I am not very much into advertisements.

The phrase 'not much into advertisement' is incorrect; 'not very much into advertisements' is more natural. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural when speaking generally.

× Not really. I tried to skip the advertisement when it comes on my phone or on my PC.

✓ Not really. I try to skip the advertisements when they come on my phone or on my PC.

The question is about habitual action, so present tense 'try' is appropriate rather than past tense 'tried'. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when speaking generally. 'It comes' should be 'they come' to agree with plural 'advertisements'.

× It is really a disturbance and it breaks the flow of the show or whatever I am watching.

✓ It is really a disturbance and it breaks the flow of the show or whatever I am watching.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× So I try to skip it off when it comes and I try to continue watching the show or the movie which I am I am watching.

✓ So I try to skip it when it comes and I try to continue watching the show or the movie which I am watching.

The phrase 'skip it off' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'skip it'. Also, the repetition 'I am I am watching' is a mistake and should be corrected to 'I am watching'.