Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和语法，避免冗余，增强表达的连贯性和准确性。

Exemplo: I remember a stationery advertisement from my childhood. It was very popular in my country because it showed many useful features. The ad was magical and powerful, so I asked my mom to buy it for me.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在错误。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I see many advertisements on trains and other transport. For example, there are posters at train and minibus stations that all passengers pass by.

Sugestão: 表达不清楚，语法错误较多，词汇使用不当。建议简化表达，注意词汇搭配和句子结构，避免重复和无意义的词语。

Exemplo: Yes, I like advertisements because they help me learn about product features. Some ads are interesting and attractive, which makes me want to watch them.

Sugestão: 表达不够准确，语法和词汇错误较多。建议使用简单句子表达观点，注意词汇拼写和搭配，增强表达的清晰度。

Exemplo: I like advertisements that promote environmental protection. Ads with eco-friendly and sustainable ideas are appealing to me.

Sugestão: 回答较为自然，但用词不当（如'scratching'应为'scrolling'），句子结构可更流畅。建议注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

Exemplo: Yes, when I scroll on my phone, ads often pop up and are hard to close. I find some of them very annoying.

× I still remember an advertisement about the stationery.

✓ I still remember an advertisement about stationery.

“stationery”是不可数名词，不需要加冠词“the”。

× The stationery was a smash hit in my country by a storm and the advertisement depicted so magical and powerful with various function and I asked my mom bought a new one for me.

✓ The stationery was a smash hit in my country like a storm, and the advertisement was depicted as so magical and powerful with various functions, and I asked my mom to buy a new one for me.

“by a storm”应改为“like a storm”表示“像风暴一样”；“depicted so magical and powerful”应改为“was depicted as so magical and powerful”；“various function”应为复数“various functions”；“I asked my mom bought”应改为“I asked my mom to buy”，动词不定式用法。

× Both of them and there are a lot of advertisements, posters on the train station and the minibus station and all of we are the passengers will go through, there will be some advertisements.

✓ Both of them, and there are a lot of advertisements and posters at the train station and the minibus station, and all of us passengers will go through; there will be some advertisements.

“on the train station”应为“at the train station”；“all of we are the passengers”应为“all of us passengers”；句子结构需调整使其更通顺。

× all of we are the passengers will go through

✓ all of us passengers will go through

“we”用作宾语时应改为“us”。

× Yes, because through the advertisements I can no more functions and details about the products.

✓ Yes, because through the advertisements I can learn more functions and details about the products.

“no more functions”表达错误，应为“learn more functions”表示“了解更多功能”。

× I think the some advertisements are really interesting and fascinating or attractive to watch it.

✓ I think some advertisements are really interesting, fascinating, or attractive to watch.

“the some advertisements”应为“some advertisements”；“to watch it”中“it”多余，应去掉。

× It seems to have some magical to attract me to bed.

✓ It seems to have some magic to attract me to buy.

“magical”是形容词，需用名词“magic”；“to bed”应为“to buy”，根据语境推测。

× And I think the advertising could combine itself with the environment.

✓ I think the advertising could combine itself with the environment.

句首不宜用“and”连接，去掉更自然。

× The friend friendly environmental and sustainable concepts could be aide into the advertisement and I will appreciate.

✓ The environmentally friendly and sustainable concepts could be added into the advertisement, and I will appreciate it.

“friend friendly environmental”应为“environmentally friendly”；“could be aide into”应为“could be added into”；句尾缺少宾语“it”。

× Yes, well I am scratching on my phone and the advertisement could jump up and it is difficult to close them.

✓ Yes, well I am scrolling on my phone and the advertisements could pop up and it is difficult to close them.

“scratching on my phone”应为“scrolling on my phone”；“advertisement could jump up”应为“advertisements could pop up”。