Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“looking forward to have”应为“looking forward to having”，并且句子结构可以更简洁自然。此外，回答中缺少连接词，导致表达不够连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember an advertisement about long stockings that impressed me as a child. Because of it, I was eager to have a pair and asked my parents, who were surprised by my sudden interest.

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和冗余，如“on trains and on subways”可以简化。句子结构较为简单，缺少连接词使表达不够流畅。建议使用更多连接词和具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and subways. For example, ads are displayed on seat covers and videos play continuously, which I find quite annoying.

Sugestão: 回答结构较好，但连接词使用不够自然，如“First”后应紧接原因，且“go for it”表达不够准确。建议使用更地道的表达和丰富词汇。

Exemplo: No, I generally dislike advertisements. Firstly, I believe that good products will naturally attract customers through word of mouth. Secondly, with the rise of short clips and TikTok videos, ads have become ubiquitous and intrusive.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，如“components of a car was made into”不完整且错误。建议完整表达观点，使用正确语法，并提供具体例子。

Exemplo: I like creative advertisements because they are entertaining. For example, I enjoyed a Honda ad where car components were cleverly assembled to form a unique design.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如“flood in every corner of screen”应为“flood every corner of the screen”，句子末尾不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确。

Exemplo: Yes, advertisements flood every corner of the screen on my phone and computer. For instance, I see ads on YouTube and Instagram videos almost all the time.

× I was really looking forward to have a pair of long stockings and ask my parents for it and they had no idea where the idea came from.

✓ I was really looking forward to having a pair of long stockings and asked my parents for it, and they had no idea where the idea came from.

动词短语“look forward to”后面应接动名词形式，因此“have”应改为“having”。另外，句中“ask”应与前文时态一致，改为过去式“asked”。

× There are videos of advertisement playing non-stop and on the subway and honestly that is very annoying.

✓ There are videos of advertisements playing non-stop on the subway, and honestly that is very annoying.

“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，因为前面提到的是多个视频中的广告。

× For example, I enjoy that one made by Honda in which the components of a car was made into.

✓ For example, I enjoy that one made by Honda in which the components of a car were made into something else.

主语“components”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“were”而非“was”。另外，句子不完整，补充“something else”使句意完整。

× Yes, nowadays advertisements flood in every corner of screen on my phone and computers.

✓ Yes, nowadays advertisements flood every corner of the screen on my phone and computer.

“screen”前应加定冠词“the”，且“computer”应为单数，与“my phone”并列时保持一致。

× there are advertisements on YouTube videos, there are advertisements on Instagram videos and you can see them whenever and.

✓ There are advertisements on YouTube videos and Instagram videos, and you can see them anytime.

原句结构混乱，结尾“whenever and”不完整，改为“anytime”使句子完整且通顺。