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Sugestão: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用更自然的句子结构，并且避免重复。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持你的观点。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember an advertisement from my childhood about a magical glass that could provide a lot of information. It impressed me so much that I asked my parents to buy it for me to help with my exams, but they refused.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用连词连接具体原因，表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I see many advertisements on trains because the train company needs money to improve their services. Also, advertisers use this space to promote their products to many passengers.

Sugestão: 回答较为自然，但可以用更准确的表达和连接词使句子更流畅。建议用because连接原因，并用具体例子支持观点。

Exemplo: No, I don't like advertisements because I think watching them is a waste of time. Therefore, I usually try to avoid them by doing something else when they appear.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达不清晰的问题。建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，并用连词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I like advertisements about useful machines that I need to buy. For example, I like phone advertisements because they show how phones help our family stay connected.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用连词连接句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. I think companies pay to show these ads, but I really dislike them. I want to close them, but sometimes I can't.

× One of the children I know a advertisement says a magical glass can give you a lot of information.

✓ One of the children I know an advertisement says a magical glass can give you a lot of information.

The word 'advertisement' is singular and starts with a vowel sound, so it should be preceded by the article 'an' instead of 'a'. This is a common singular and plural issue involving article usage before vowels.

× So I asked my parents to buy a buy it for my next exam but they rejected me.

✓ So I asked my parents to buy it for my next exam but they rejected me.

The phrase 'buy a buy it' is incorrect and redundant. The pronoun 'it' should be used alone after 'buy' to refer to the item previously mentioned. This is an incorrect use of pronouns causing confusion.

× Yes, there are many advertising on chains because the train company needs money, need money to improve the skills and the advertisement also spend money for them to public their ideas.

✓ Yes, there is much advertising on trains because the train company needs money to improve the services, and the advertisements also spend money to publicize their ideas.

'Advertising' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular, so 'there is' is correct. 'Chains' is a typo and should be 'trains'. 'Skills' is incorrect in this context; 'services' fits better. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'also spend'. 'Public' should be 'publicize' as a verb. These are singular/plural and word choice issues.

× No I don't like it because I think watching advertisements just like waste of time.

✓ No, I don't like them because I think watching advertisements is just a waste of time.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to plural 'advertisements'; 'them' is correct. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'just a waste of time'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure issue.

× When it's coming I will do something else.

✓ When it comes, I will do something else.

The phrase 'When it's coming' is incorrect for future events; 'When it comes' is the correct present simple tense used for future time clauses. This is a future tense issue.

× I like some useful machine I need to buy.

✓ I like some useful machines I need to buy.

'Machine' should be plural 'machines' because 'some' indicates more than one. This is a singular and plural issue.

× It is useful from our family to connect each other, so I like those advertisements.

✓ They are useful for our family to connect with each other, so I like those advertisements.

'It' is singular but refers to plural 'advertisements', so 'They' is correct. 'From our family' should be 'for our family'. Also, 'connect each other' should be 'connect with each other'. These are incorrect pronoun and preposition uses.

× Yeah, I often say, I think maybe they use money to buy the opportunity to let us sing it.

✓ Yeah, I often say, I think maybe they use money to buy the opportunity to let us see it.

The verb 'sing' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'see'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/verbs causing confusion.

× But I'm really dislike it.

✓ But I really dislike it.

The verb 'dislike' is a stative verb and does not use the auxiliary 'am' in present tense. 'I'm really dislike' is incorrect; it should be 'I really dislike'. This is a modal verb usage and sentence structure issue.

× I want to close all it, but I I can't do it.

✓ I want to close all of it, but I can't do it.

The phrase 'close all it' is incorrect; it should be 'close all of it' to correctly use the pronoun with quantifier. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typo. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.