Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Candidato
Well, when I was a little kid, I could actually remember one or two ads. That was quite impressive for me. And I particularly remember one that was actually about some kind of beverage for sports. I could still remember the model in the advertisement showing us.
Examinador
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Candidato
Well, umm, I would argue that while I was traveling on the subway, I do see a large number of ads. On the other hand, when I was using other mass transit systems like aviation or the rail systems, I see relatively fewer ads. I don't know why, but that's.
Examinador
Do you like advertisements?
Candidato
Yes I do. I think they can be quite fun and if my memory serves me well, there have been lots of successful ads using different propaganda techniques like the bandwagon effect or celebrity endorsement. This could be quite meaningful to teach us and improve our media literacy.
Examinador
What kind of advertising do you like?
Candidato
I actually prefer slogan and Flyers. I find these forms of ads quite informative and they can help me to keep the information better than other forms of advertising choices such as commercials on TV or on read radio programs.
Examinador
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Candidato
Well, I did in the past when the Internet safeguard system in my country was not so advanced. Unfortunately, these days, with their functions greatly improved, it's quite difficult to see any advertisement on our phone or laptops. Instead, we can simply focus on what we need to do.
Avaliação
Total
Gramática
× I could still remember the model in the advertisement showing us.
✓ I could still remember the model in the advertisement showing us something.
句子中“showing us”后缺少宾语，导致表达不完整。需要补充宾语使句子完整。
× I do see a large number of ads.
✓ I see a large number of ads.
此处使用一般现在时表达习惯动作，不需要强调助动词“do”，去掉“do”更自然。
× I see relatively fewer ads.
✓ I see relatively few ads.
“few”用于可数名词，表示数量少，搭配“ads”更合适，“fewer”用于比较级，需有比较对象。
× I don't know why, but that's.
✓ I don't know why, but that's how it is.
句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致表达不清晰，需要补充完整句子。
× I actually prefer slogan and Flyers.
✓ I actually prefer slogans and flyers.
“slogan”和“flyers”均为可数名词，表示多种广告形式时应使用复数形式。
× commercials on TV or on read radio programs.
✓ commercials on TV or on radio programs.
“read”在此处用法错误，应去掉，正确表达为“on radio programs”。
× it's quite difficult to see any advertisement on our phone or laptops.
✓ it's quite difficult to see any advertisements on our phones or laptops.
“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，且“phone”和“laptop”应保持数的一致，均用复数。
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